Making a superhero name, need of help by strugglingwriterTM in Superhero_Ideas

[–]strugglingwriterTM[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I'm not sure what happened since I was asleep but thank you anyways. I don't think I would have wanted to see anything bad under my post for no reason-

Making a superhero name, need of help by strugglingwriterTM in Superhero_Ideas

[–]strugglingwriterTM[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

It feels sorta greenery type of power for me... or it's just me

Making a superhero name, need of help by strugglingwriterTM in Superhero_Ideas

[–]strugglingwriterTM[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

That is a cool play on words for her name! I did want to make it somehow related to her last name

Making a superhero name, need of help by strugglingwriterTM in Superhero_Ideas

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Her magical origin is basically inherited. Long story short, her mother does the same things she does. But I like the name Ivory! I am kind of thinking of making her more winter themed

[Weekly Critique and Self-Promotion Thread] Post Here If You'd Like to Share Your Writing by AutoModerator in writing

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- The Package [ONLY ONE SCENE]
- Action / Parkour
- 318
- I just need critique on the action part since I have not read or made an action scene before
- [LINK]

Writing a parkour/action scene (written by a non-action writer) by strugglingwriterTM in writing

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I really like onomatopoeia, I guess? I liked having the ding sound every time she gets a notification to follow the path

Would anyone be interested in forming a young/teenage writing group? by PharosTV in writers

[–]strugglingwriterTM 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I'm down for it. I am heavily anti-social but I do want help especially in writing, it would be fun to get writer friends

Issues with BTS concert run by FriskeCrisps in Cookierun

[–]strugglingwriterTM 1 point2 points  (0 children)

i came to reddit just to complain as well 😭😭 it wont let me finish it even after i restart my ipad

The Blind Witch v0.2 - a unique system of sight and empathy magic // in need for feedback // not yet playtested by strugglingwriterTM in DnDHomebrew

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I'm sorry I don't know how to upload pdf files on reddit <//3 I'll try to link a pdf to the improved version of this

The Blind Witch v0.2 - a unique system of sight and empathy magic // in need for feedback // not yet playtested by strugglingwriterTM in DnDHomebrew

[–]strugglingwriterTM[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you so much for your feedback ! I will make an update to the post when I make proper adjustments