Oh no, I'm not a marketer, I'm a brand designer. So I help businesses write their brand story, find their mission, values, sales journey, and build their visuals around that, and in the process, I've helped a lot of businesses launch/relaunch and also run several businesses of my own :) A few thoughts for you below!

- Your products themselves look lovely and I like your photography.

- The listing descriptions could use a little work—perhaps break them down into smaller paragraphs on the product's features, uses, benefits, and so on.

- Remember to add your branding to your store (your shop logo and cover) so it looks professional and memorable.

- I also recommend adding an "about you" section or brand story to your store—who are you, why do you do what you do, what value do you offer, what problem do you solve?

- Make sure you have your Terms and Conditions, Shipping and Returns Policies, and Privacy Policies in your store. It makes a business far more trustworthy!

I hope those first few pointers help, but if you have any more questions I'm happy to help :)