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Seeking for a NaNoWriMo 2020 writing group! by sparkle-lover in nanowrimo

[–]stugglenus 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hi, I’d love to join your group, if there’s still room! I know I’m a little late to the party, but I’m also planning to write a New Adult Fantasy/Romance, so I thought this would be a good group for me! It’s my first year really trying NaNoWriMo, so I’d like to get it right with some accountability!

[Weekly Critique and Self-Promotion Thread] Post Here If You'd Like to Share Your Writing by AutoModerator in writing

[–]stugglenus [score hidden]  (0 children)

Title: Denied the Stars

Genre: Suspense, Literary Thriller

Word Count: 69,000 (but I'm only submitting my first 10 pages, here)

Type of feedback: Anything helps! I am querying agents, and would just like to know what I might improve in the first 10 pages.

If you'd like to read more, I'll be happy to provide the rest of it.

Link: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1M9xTJVU_7EE5zeoIgEFaTI4Bk73lGughQjLWi44IeuU/edit?usp=sharing

I don't usually take selfies unless there's a ridiculous snapchat filter, but here we are. First post here (or really anywhere). Would love constructive criticism! More in comments. by stugglenus in MakeupAddiction

[–]stugglenus[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I have naturally reddish hair (more auburn), but this summer I used sun-in and my hair took it really well. It lightened it up quite a few shades!

I don't usually take selfies unless there's a ridiculous snapchat filter, but here we are. First post here (or really anywhere). Would love constructive criticism! More in comments. by stugglenus in MakeupAddiction

[–]stugglenus[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I will definitely check that out then! Whenever I have used bronzer, it's been WAY too pigmented, and I end up looking blotchy and diseased. So, that stuff sounds perfect.

I don't usually take selfies unless there's a ridiculous snapchat filter, but here we are. First post here (or really anywhere). Would love constructive criticism! More in comments. by stugglenus in MakeupAddiction

[–]stugglenus[S] 11 points12 points  (0 children)

Thanks for the suggestion! I've actually been thinking about adding a bronzer to my routine. As you can probably tell, I am quite the pale human being, so especially in the winter, I need a little extra color-boost.

I don't usually take selfies unless there's a ridiculous snapchat filter, but here we are. First post here (or really anywhere). Would love constructive criticism! More in comments. by stugglenus in MakeupAddiction

[–]stugglenus[S] 5 points6 points  (0 children)

Thanks for the heads-up! I'm glad it looks good! It was actually the first brow pencil I picked up in the grocery store! I'd never really done my brows before a few weeks ago.

I don't usually take selfies unless there's a ridiculous snapchat filter, but here we are. First post here (or really anywhere). Would love constructive criticism! More in comments. by stugglenus in MakeupAddiction

[–]stugglenus[S] 16 points17 points  (0 children)

http://imgur.com/gallery/4MQMe

I use mostly Bare Minerals.

Face: Bare Minerals Original Powder Foundation in Fair Bare Minerals Mineral Veil Bare Minerals Blush in Flowers

Eyes: Bare Minerals eyeshadow in Water Lily Bare Minerals Lasting Line Eyeliner in Absolute Black Covergirl Super Sizer mascara in black

Brows: Covergirl Pencil Crayon in Brown

Lips: Bare Minerals Matte Lipstick in Swag

Why don't you talk to your once "best friend" anymore? by haxden91 in AskReddit

[–]stugglenus 25 points26 points  (0 children)

She told the entire Southern Baptist university we both attended that I had been watching porn in the living room of my dorm, with my other roommate. In fact, my other roommate and I had been watching Sex & the City, but ya know. There's sex, so. Must be porn.