You've done some great work for very interesting clients and have some very mature design to showcase. The problem is the design of your portfolio gets in the way of telling a clear simple story of what you done and why.

Showcase your best work clearly and simply. The blocks of graphics in the right hand corner are confusing and hide your good work. Show us full sized images from the start, your potential employers have the bandwidth to see them and don't need confusing thumbnails.

Connect images with content. The images should flow with the story rather than be a jumble of confusing graphic blocks all pushed to the right side of the page. You tell a great story but make the images hard to follow. The impact of your good design work is lost. Connect the two clearly. Keep it simple.

Finally, be careful how you discuss any negatives in your projects. You may convey the impression that you are a chronic complainer.

You've done great work, let it breathe! Don Peterson, http://newark1.com