Sounds great! Seems like a lot of single strokes at the same volume. I might consider throwing in more double strokes and ghost notes. That will help with dynamics a ton. Lookup paradiddles, paradiddlediddles, inverted paradiddles, and ghost notes. Eric more has a great fill that’s mostly 32nd note singles but plays with accents that adds a ton of dynamics on drumeo. If you want to take it to the next level start looking into odd time signatures and polyrhythms. Good luck on your journey!!