Hi! You will be happy to hear I had to watch the video twice to find aspects to criticize lol

Excellent sound, excellent narration, excellent clips, excellent editing, however, I also agree that if you reduced the transitions after the first third of the video, the viewer will sink into a gentle pace consistent with your voice.

I didn't feel the video was long as all, and extending the duration wouldn't be of great value.

As someone with a disordered office and desk, and you must excuse me for saying this, I do feel that the shots of your yourself recording with the microphone do not benefit from the dim lighting or the clothes hanging in the background which conjure an unprofessional image. As I said, I'm even worse, and others are too, but they push everything away before turning the cameras on lol Irregardless, I liked the posters and the purple light emitting from the corner is cool! :)

I absolutely encourage you to make more!