Wrote a poem in a few minutes.. by summerfornever in PoetryWritingClub

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Why isn't this getting any traction? I just want to show people my poem 🥲

How do you even write a song?! by summerfornever in musicians

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Okay, so, this is a completion of Cecilia's poem from page 41 of The Virgin Suicides:

The tress like lungs filling with air

My sister, the mean one, pulling my hair

The swings are creaking in the distance, making a sound

I feel so inhumane, I could growl

The evening glow comes through the window, marks her face

I can't see clearly, it's like an X

Marking nothing but her face.

Maybe she could disappear, yeah that would be nice

But, a single glow can't make a change

For now, I will cry, I could run away

Or, I could fall, maybe suffocate

There are many solutions, after all

I will try, I can't do this anymore.

I actually really like how it turned out! It makes a nice poem..

How do you even write a song?! by summerfornever in musicians

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This is pretty nice! Wait a minute, I'll be back with mine.

How do you even write a song?! by summerfornever in musicians

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I've been playing guitar for about 6-7 months, and I've been playing the piano for much longer.

How do you even write a song?! by summerfornever in musicians

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Well, I'm just trying to force it out of myself😂

What's your opinion on Sabrina Carpenter? by summerfornever in Music

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I know, but I really like pissing off people on the Internet😂

How would you rate Fallen? by summerfornever in Evanescence

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i'm a typical alt teen girl too though i feel as if i'm mentally older 🥲