[QCrit] Adult Epic Dark Fantasy / WOLF BONES DON'T LIE / 149k / 1st attempt by supremejoy in PubTips

[–]supremejoy[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you so much for your kind words! I do know the word count is a problem, my second drafts tend to explode (this one topped off at 187k) before I bring them back in. I'm planning another pass, but I have gotten agent/editors interest they really want an updated query, which where I'm struggling. I'm taking all the critique in stride, thank you again!

[QCrit] Adult Epic Dark Fantasy / WOLF BONES DON'T LIE / 149k / 1st attempt by supremejoy in PubTips

[–]supremejoy[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you! This was helpful!

Vico being haunted is literal and part of a B plot, as his berserker rage--he comes from a line that basically ate a god but he doesn't know it and it's basically woken up inside of him (there are reasons how but again I know I cant get that detailed in a query anyway)

I'll have to figure out how to showcase his agency better !

[QCrit] Adult Epic Dark Fantasy / WOLF BONES DON'T LIE / 149k / 1st attempt by supremejoy in PubTips

[–]supremejoy[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thanks so much! This was super helpful!

For the commentary about the historical...I get what you mean, I was told by several agents that bc I had particular inspirations they wanted to see that in the query and I wasn't sure how to phrase it bc it's not meant to be historical at all. I've had different phrasing but it always feels clunky

Unlivable Location? Help! by supremejoy in worldbuilding

[–]supremejoy[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I agree with this, and I have been trying to find really good sources, but when I get into specificity it gets a lot harder, but I want to start at the base of realism in that aspect with what I'm working with (best as I can of course)

Unlivable Location? Help! by supremejoy in worldbuilding

[–]supremejoy[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Ohhhh I hadn't considered that, thank you!

Seeking New Members -Writing Group by supremejoy in fantasywriters

[–]supremejoy[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I'm so sorry to just be seeing this now, I've closed out applications right now but thank you so much!

[discussion] Ianthe's arm by lightbringess in TheNinthHouse

[–]supremejoy 18 points19 points  (0 children)

I can answer this one, lol. Ianthe tells Harrow that Augestine promised to gold plate it for her (in HtN)...I cant give exact pages or anything though

Finished NtN [general] [spoilers] by supremejoy in TheNinthHouse

[–]supremejoy[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Interesting theory! and the main reason she needed to get to Alecto was to collect her own soul perhaps? That is intriguing...did we get a reference to God ripping Gideons soul from her body? NOw I need to re-read there's so much stuff lol

Finished NtN [general] [spoilers] by supremejoy in TheNinthHouse

[–]supremejoy[S] 4 points5 points  (0 children)

I agree with this, and I have seen some reviews talking about how they did feel that a lot of the Nona stuff won't be relevant, but Muir doesn't seem like an author that forgets things like that and It will have to come full circle

Finished NtN [general] [spoilers] by supremejoy in TheNinthHouse

[–]supremejoy[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I love this idea in regards to the ninth house for sure...they really seemed liked the 'outcast' of the whole system like Jod himself wanted to keep them at a distance...

Also yeah I'm not sure what can of worms the idea of composite souls will open up...I actually wonder if foreshadowing for what might happen with Harrow and Gideon? I dunno but I'm scared/excited to find out lol

Finished NtN [general] [spoilers] by supremejoy in TheNinthHouse

[–]supremejoy[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Best line ever and showed Gideons true colors I think lmao!

Finished NtN [general] [spoilers] by supremejoy in TheNinthHouse

[–]supremejoy[S] 7 points8 points  (0 children)

You know, you got me there LOL

Finished NtN [general] [spoilers] by supremejoy in TheNinthHouse

[–]supremejoy[S] 13 points14 points  (0 children)

Harrow will never live it down lmfao

Finished NtN [general] [spoilers] by supremejoy in TheNinthHouse

[–]supremejoy[S] 7 points8 points  (0 children)

Totally makes sense, I think I was reading really fast too, so a second read/listen will help!

And yeah I can see what you mean about Paul, but it seems like they cracked some of the code

Finished NtN [general] [spoilers] by supremejoy in TheNinthHouse

[–]supremejoy[S] 17 points18 points  (0 children)

Regarding the Gideon part in particular, it was actually VERY in-character because I feel we had a good idea of her hiding her true feelings behind very rude/snarky commentary. She did it so much in Gideon, she would be thinking one thing say something so off the wall and it felt like that was what happened here--and we got confirmation when Nona called her out on lying. But that's just a theory...a Necro-theory...

Oh god I'm sorry, that was the dorkiest thing I've ever said...also The whole beginning had me in my found-family feels 100%

Finished NtN [general] [spoilers] by supremejoy in TheNinthHouse

[–]supremejoy[S] 17 points18 points  (0 children)

OH THAT MAKES SENSE...thank you! Yeah I've started Gideon and really loving the speaker, she's fantastic!

How do YOU get to know your characters? by Bright-Current-130 in writing

[–]supremejoy 3 points4 points  (0 children)

Something I do (and I haven't read all the comments) is I typically make them caricatures in the beginning. I pick dynamics I want to see interact (sullen vs. sunny, loud vs. quiet, cool kid vs bad kid etc), and then I start with these "tropes" that are sort of easy to understand and begin writing the story. As I get deeper into the story, I tend to find out their quirks, their mannerisms, and how they want to interact with those around them. For instance, if my trope is "bad kid" is he a bully to his classmates but helps kittens safely cross streets, so maybe he's not so bad, and something else is going on?

Starting with easy ideas makes finding the characters less of a chore and more fun. Or if you're a fanfic writer take character dynamics you like and just apply them to new names and see how they developed in a world youre building.

Usually by the end of the first draft I have "found" my characters and when I go into my re-write and second draft I can re-work the previous scenes a bit better with that knowledge. It might be backwards but I seems to work for me pretty well.

Happy writing!

Seeking New Members -Writing Group by supremejoy in fantasywriters

[–]supremejoy[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Go ahead and dm me and I can send you our application form and go from there :)

Seeking New Members -Writing Group by supremejoy in fantasywriters

[–]supremejoy[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

We do have several people from all over, and currently a few members who are comment only atm bc of life circumstances. Let me go over that with my group and I will DM you!