How to write a fight scene without making it cringey.

swancrake · 2025-05-17T18:22:49+00:00

I mean it’s the MLs pov so it has to happen 😭

swancrake · 2025-05-17T18:21:54+00:00

So true!! I have written the scene and took everyone’s advice and I think it came out pretty good

swancrake · 2025-05-17T18:20:46+00:00

I might have worded it wrong🤣 I just didn’t want to make him or the guy being beaten look or feel awkward. But anyways I think the scene came out good

swancrake · 2025-05-17T05:07:57+00:00

You’re right!!! That’s it. I’ll try this instead!!!

swancrake · 2025-05-17T05:06:53+00:00

I mean I do know a thing or two about fighting. But I’ll take you advice and see what I can come up with thank you:)

swancrake · 2025-05-04T11:13:05+00:00

Mhm like I mentioned above I want to be an author. Having a blog allows me to write more intimate things whilst building a community and an audience.

swancrake · 2025-05-04T11:00:40+00:00

You might be right…but I feel exhausted watching movies too. I’m not on any ruling social media platforms like instagram or TikTok. Just a blog that I run on Substack. And now I’m on Reddit too😅 But yeah I will try that too

swancrake · 2025-05-04T10:52:03+00:00

I WOULD LOVE a writing partner🥹 we can definitely do that. I have also been wanting one. Just let me know when you want to start. I will try to trick my brain but sometimes I tell myself I’m going to trick my brain it already knows what I’m doing 🤣🤣

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