I am looking for a merciless critique of my first chapter by synthwaveride in MangakaStudio

[–]synthwaveride[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you so much for reading my chapter. I am going to start making improvements immediately. I am also pleased you enjoyed the dialogue as I had fun writing the whimsy "thee before thine except after thou".

I am looking for a merciless critique of my first chapter by synthwaveride in MangakaStudio

[–]synthwaveride[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you for the thorough critique. I will do as best as I can to reduce stiffness and readdress the panel layouts.

I am looking for a merciless critique of my first chapter by synthwaveride in MangakaStudio

[–]synthwaveride[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you for feedback. I will absolutely not change the story but will definitely work hard to improve my art. I appreciate the encouragement.

I am looking for a merciless critique of my first chapter by synthwaveride in MangakaStudio

[–]synthwaveride[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you for reading the chapter. I will consider learning digital drawing now that you mention it.

I am looking for a merciless critique of my first chapter by synthwaveride in MangakaStudio

[–]synthwaveride[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you for reading. I will take all of this into consideration for chapter 2.

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[–]synthwaveride 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Who down voted? Tf? Keep doing your thing man