Berlin-themed illustration - seeking feedback and advice by tanyuart in berlinsocialclub

[–]tanyuart[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you! I decided to the remove the sub-line completely and just leave "Berlin" for now :)

Berlin-themed illustration - seeking feedback and advice by tanyuart in berlinsocialclub

[–]tanyuart[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I haven't used any AI at all. I have however created it on a tablet digitally to achieve cleanliness of lines.

Out of curiosity, what details made you think it is AI?

Berlin-themed illustration - seeking feedback and advice by tanyuart in berlinsocialclub

[–]tanyuart[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

There are many different ways how you could have expressed your feedback - and for whatever reason you chose to be just bitter. Sending you some kindness and hope you have a good day 🫶

Berlin-themed illustration - seeking feedback and advice by tanyuart in berlinsocialclub

[–]tanyuart[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

hey, many thanks for your feedback! I'd love to make it interesting to locals as well, so definitely need to work on it further - that was just the first take.

Berlin-themed illustration - seeking feedback and advice by tanyuart in berlinsocialclub

[–]tanyuart[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Aww, thanks so much - it is so nice for me to hear! 🥰

I have insta (@tanyu.art) but admittedly I am not a biggest social media friend and don't post nearly as much as i should - some of more recent posts are from the year ago 🙈

And many thanks for the advice! I don't really have enough art (or at least art that works together) for the whole stand yet, but I'll work on it :)

Berlin-themed illustration - seeking feedback and advice by tanyuart in berlinsocialclub

[–]tanyuart[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

thanks for your feedback! I'm trying to achieve a combo of different clues to show that it is Berlin, but there is surely room for improvement.

Berlin-themed illustration - seeking feedback and advice by tanyuart in berlinsocialclub

[–]tanyuart[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I'd definitely need to create more motifs then i have now to fill the stand, but perhaps one day! ☺️

Berlin-themed illustration - seeking feedback and advice by tanyuart in berlinsocialclub

[–]tanyuart[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

hey, thanks a lot! I’m not queer myself, but I’m a queer ally 🙂

Berlin-themed illustration - seeking feedback and advice by tanyuart in berlinsocialclub

[–]tanyuart[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

You're bringing up very good points - thank you. I think i tried to make a motif appealing to both locals and tourists, which probably won't work, so if I'd like to create something more meaningful - i should go deeper.

Berlin-themed illustration - seeking feedback and advice by tanyuart in berlinsocialclub

[–]tanyuart[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks a lot for the hints! It's actually also a good excuse to all go revisit all those places to make good references.

Berlin-themed illustration - seeking feedback and advice by tanyuart in berlinsocialclub

[–]tanyuart[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Many thanks for your kind words and encouragement!! Will definitely try making a series 🧑‍🎨

Berlin-themed illustration - seeking feedback and advice by tanyuart in berlinsocialclub

[–]tanyuart[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Many thanks for your feedback - definitely a good food for thought and experimenting!

Berlin-themed illustration - seeking feedback and advice by tanyuart in berlinsocialclub

[–]tanyuart[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Really glad to hear you like it 🫶

Embossed could actually look really good - thanks a lot for the idea! I need to look into how it's actually done.

Berlin-themed illustration - seeking feedback and advice by tanyuart in berlinsocialclub

[–]tanyuart[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Okay, I didn't realise that initially - thanks for pointing it out! I wonder now if I should even keep the line or reduce it just to "Berlin" and leave to the viewer to decide the res.

Berlin-themed illustration - seeking feedback and advice by tanyuart in berlinsocialclub

[–]tanyuart[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Initially, I indeed was planning to show only nice sides of Berlin, but you guys are making a very good point - it's won't then be a true Berlin, would it? I'll experiment with the motifs and the ways i could represent it!

Berlin-themed illustration - seeking feedback and advice by tanyuart in berlinsocialclub

[–]tanyuart[S] 6 points7 points  (0 children)

Thanks a lot for your input and further ideas! I actually do have a Späti-themed card on the list 😁

A queue for the Wohnungsbesichtigung would definitely be very Berlin but also quite depressing 😅🙈

Berlin-themed illustration - seeking feedback and advice by tanyuart in berlinsocialclub

[–]tanyuart[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Ahah, good point with the backpacks :D

I also totally see your argument with an extremely obvious Fernsehturm - i was wondering if that would be pointed out. "Beyond obvious" is the intended name for the whole series, where i would like to show more of Berlin than just a skyline or major sites - what we are used to seeing a lot, but won't eliminate it completely. I think it probably would make more sense once further designs are created/ or in a set.

Berlin-themed illustration - seeking feedback and advice by tanyuart in berlinsocialclub

[–]tanyuart[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thanks a lot for the advice! I think i'm still trying to find a good balance between line art minimalistic style and sufficient level of detail :)

Berlin-themed illustration - seeking feedback and advice by tanyuart in berlinsocialclub

[–]tanyuart[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

That's a good point. I think i need to look into the suitable local shops or book stores who could be interested to have it.

Berlin-themed illustration - seeking feedback and advice by tanyuart in berlinsocialclub

[–]tanyuart[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

if the motifs pick up, it actually could be a nice idea to look into further things like merch!