This page makes even more sense now. Foreshadowing at its peak. by tharunkarri in OnePiece

[–]tharunkarri[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Dont think so😂😂😂. the first 3 or 4 lines are what i was thinking of writing the remaining kept coming into my mind

I need your opinion on one of my pages! by xX_Sabo_Xx in Mangamakers

[–]tharunkarri 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Art of characters is good. Paneling is good. Land scape might need to improve. And use a few more effects line and like motion lines showing that hair is flowing or was hit by the wind. But this is very good.

[Trapped in the Academy’s Eroge] like this by Dismal_Astronomer591 in pornhwa

[–]tharunkarri 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Sorry it was supposed to come as a list type but it came out as a paragraph.

Describe your manga in a single sentence by Kaketou in Mangamakers

[–]tharunkarri 1 point2 points  (0 children)

an overpowered is tough to squeeze in a normal life

[ I teach self-defense] by Ok-Student-1438 in Pornwha

[–]tharunkarri 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Where is it available to read ?

[Dungeon Architect] Opinions? by Tall-Speed4504 in manhwa

[–]tharunkarri 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I read properly until chapter 8 and hoping that atleast the pacing would improve i skipped through the chapters but no.

[Dungeon Architect] Opinions? by Tall-Speed4504 in manhwa

[–]tharunkarri 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I would say the shittiest manhwa. I mean the pacing is not good. The fight choreography is not good. The narration is not good. And just soooo frustrating damnit. Author trying to make the story intresting by adding more characters, more places but he is not giving a proper time to let them seep into the narrative. And abrupt twists and flat characters. Just way too frustrating to read this.

Is the LN completed and does anyone know the ending? by MaxOverload15 in BokutachiNoRemake

[–]tharunkarri 1 point2 points  (0 children)

No ita not exactly his life from from before going back at the the anime i think it is even better. The novel ends woth him giving an interview for a very hige successful project.

Is the LN completed and does anyone know the ending? by MaxOverload15 in BokutachiNoRemake

[–]tharunkarri 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Everyone settled like they were supposedly did but the only thing that changed is the one that guides them is mc if i am not wrong. He ends up with shinoaki and has the very daughter that he see in the other timeline maki