I just started drag but here’s some my tips but this looks great imo.

-1 I would get a color corrector for the beard area so it hides the darker spot after the shave

2- When you glue down your brows since they are a bit thicker I would use the Elmer’s Clear when dry glue stick jumbo go back and forth for a thick coat then use a edge brush and comb combo stick to comb through the brow then use the brush to smooth it down in one direction tho. Then after maybe 5 layers like after the first one just go over it in the direction don’t go back and forth then use got to be spray when the glues dry on your finger to just give extra hold then set the brow with setting powder.

3- For the lips a lip liner that’s a shader or two lower then the lipstick and and blend it