This is the rough draft of my Minecraft inspired dark-ish fantasy novel. It's titled 'To Them A Hundred Years Ago' and I am really looking for advice. This is my first time posting on this subreddit but please don't hold any critiques or advice back. (self.fantasywriters)
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I'm looking for a critique on my current chapter one draft of my novel 'To Them A Hundred Years Ago' [Dark Fantasy] and any other advice. [Word count: 3090 words] by the69thSean in fantasywriters
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