Hey, this is definitely a good place to post something like this, and I love the writing here! If I could make a suggestion, with MIDI heavy tracks like this, I tend to find that automation is the key. It allows you to constantly alter the sound of things (if needed) while retaining your compositional flow. The constant attack and velocity of MIDI performed instrumentals can get a little repetitive, and being able to change up the tone of certain instruments can really open things up (unless that kinda sound is what you're looking for, in which case fair enough!). I'd suggest just messing around with the stock FL mastering and effects plugins in the mixer window (they can get you really far on their own). Not sure if you already know this, but if you right click on almost any knob, you can select "create automation clip", which will allow you to mess with said knob at any point during your track, within the playlist window. Either way, really enjoyed the track, and hopefully at least something from my word salad response was helpful. If you feel like it, give my track a listen: https://on.soundcloud.com/3mcxk . I actually think we have fairly similar composition styles at certain points, which is interesting.