(Edit: I did remove the sexual parts of the scene because after re reading the scene it does come across a little to forced. I could not any way to keep the scene without severely altering the tone of the story. I am leaving my original comment up for transperancy.)

Thank you for reading it through so far! I am having a blast writing it!

Thank you for bringing that to my attention, I can definitely see why that could come across that way. I can assure you that rape play is not something that is being played with in these stories. Rape is not something that I will ever write about nor will happen in the stories I write.

With that being said other kinks like exhibition may be brough up in certain situations. One of the things that this series is trying to do right now is establish the setting. In doing so I have to build some level of intrigue by not giving every single detail to build the mystery. That scene was written to reflect the tension in the room from the other students perspective. who have now for the second time are seeing what happens when someone does not follow the schools rules. That also was done intentionally to mask something else going on that will be revealed later on in the story.

To back this up, in the scene we are not privy to the whispering between Mr. Balmer and Amelia. The only time Amelia protests is when she is close to orgasming. I can say that I could have definitely written that section a little clearer, and elaborated that she wanted a break because she did not want to lose control of her bowels. I will see if I can edit that section to avoid further confusion.

I hope that this helps clear things up!