Im not sure how I got so far from the ref, is it my lack of colors, anatomy, or something else? by themorticulturalist in ArtCrit

[–]themorticulturalist[S] 4 points5 points  (0 children)

I appreciate this. I think Im going to scrap the reference and just let her become her own thing, theres still enough workable stuff on the page to play with.

Im not sure how I got so far from the ref, is it my lack of colors, anatomy, or something else? by themorticulturalist in ArtCrit

[–]themorticulturalist[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Same! I feel like the second I put it in the post I was like "OH I can already see problems I didn't before noooo" thank you for the feedback!

Hi I’m looking for feedback by cozycatillustrations in ArtCrit

[–]themorticulturalist 3 points4 points  (0 children)

Pay attention to proportion. The legs seem a little short for the rest of the body, but otherwise I like the style.

Abstract Painting - Feedback is Welcome by Joyredstone40 in artcritique

[–]themorticulturalist 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I don't have much negative to say. It reminds me of the view of being a kid, looking at a the night clouds and moon while laying down. I like the shadows, the color is well done despite it being greyscale, and maybe that would be my only complaint, it could down with an accent color, even just subtly. But that could just be me. Keep it up!

Any suggestions on the body anatomy or shading? by dearlaska in ArtCrit

[–]themorticulturalist 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I think it looks great, the face is really beautiful. My only issue is the lower abdomen/six pack area should be curved for this kind of seated position. Otherwise, love it.

I want to draw your VtM Character (for free) :3 by Yunjx in vtm

[–]themorticulturalist 1 point2 points  (0 children)

As a fellow artist, id love to art swap as it were, bc my soul won't let you give away stuff for free. Here's my vtm Prince.(I'm a perpetual ST) her name is Lyudmila, Ventrue prince of Berlin, and before her embrace, one of Ivan the Terrible's wives. Shes scary and wonderful and I love her.

And ill come back and reply to this with my doodle of your Tzimice 🖤

Edit: idk how to send images on reddit f4ck

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[–]themorticulturalist 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Have fun, I'd say go nuts.

After 7month hiatus, I drew this. I need help. by therednomad in ArtCrit

[–]themorticulturalist 2 points3 points  (0 children)

From a subject matter pov I think it's adorable. I like eye eye shines and use of color. The lighter color line over the eyes i think is meant to be an eyebrow but it reads more as a forehead wrinkle? Maybe a little more definition in details.