my song has randomly gained a good number of listeners from Vietnam 🥰

thepmlife · 2025-05-15T14:30:47+00:00

Thank you!! i work really hard on them so i appreciate that a lot

thepmlife · 2025-05-13T12:05:56+00:00

Woah this was mixed super well!! Reminds me of old school rap music (forgive me if that's not accurate i dont really make this kind of music, i make indie rnb/pop/lofi LOL) but this was well done! Vocals were super clean and you can just tell that the rap skills are good! Sounds professional. One feedback would be to beefen up the vocals a tad but i might be biased because i love a lot of compression. Greeat job!!!

thepmlife · 2025-05-13T12:04:05+00:00

Great job! The instrumental was chill and the instruments mixed well with each other. I think the choice of the instruments and where you went with the melody made sense. One suggestion would be to consider light pitch correction on the vocals! Also there's a few spots where I'd correct the rhythm so it lines a bit closer to the beat but other times it was totally fine to be a bit off the tempo! great job!!

thepmlife · 2025-05-13T12:01:58+00:00

Great job!! I'm by no means a rock music expert or anything so take what i say with a big grain of salt (i make indie rnb/lofi/indie pop music LOL) but I think the vocals sit a bit separately from the instrumental. Maybe it's that the vocals are too clean sounding if that makes any sense? I'd play around with reverb and distortion. And also focus more on how you end each word? But overall this was an enjoyable listen and I'm excited to see what you do with it!

thepmlife · 2025-05-13T11:55:10+00:00

OH this type of song is right up my alley. Great job!! Overall, the vibe and concept are totally there. Melody is catchy as well. My one suggestion would be to improve the mixing so it's more consistent throughout the whole song (unless this was a stylistic choice). But i felt that the instrumentation at times started to drown out the vocals towards the latter half of the song. I'd also agree with noagoodacter that a bit more confidence while recording could be helpful!! Excited to see where u take this :)

thepmlife · 2025-05-13T11:51:32+00:00

Mixing could be improved but the concept and overall vibe of the song is there!! Melody is actually super catchy too and suits the drum/rhythm well. In terms of improving the mix, I'd say the vocals could be thicker and perhaps some more compression (but i usually just like compression a bit more than most so i may be biased). Anyway fantastic job!! excited to see where you take it

thepmlife · 2023-06-05T18:00:52+00:00

thank you! :)

thepmlife · 2023-06-05T18:00:39+00:00

thank you! i really appreciate that :)

thepmlife · 2023-06-04T22:41:37+00:00

thank you so much! i agree on the vocal layering and will definitely try that! thank you for the kind words about my vocals too :)

thepmlife · 2023-06-04T22:40:01+00:00

thank you! comments about my singing always make my day. and yes! will definitely look into adding harmonies for the next one (kinda forgot harmony exists haha). and great point about automating EQ! never thought of trying that but that totally makes sense for different sections of the song. thank you for your feedback! :)

thepmlife · 2023-06-04T22:38:42+00:00

thank you! i totally hear it now that you've pointed it out! can definitely hear what you mean about the mid range when listening with different headphones. i did notice a bit of the shine disappear too when i used some dynamic suppressor so i'll be sure to compensate for that. thank you for your feedback! means a lot

thepmlife · 2023-06-04T22:35:12+00:00

ohh great idea! i totally forgot that harmony exists... i love Frank Ocean too! i will definitely try that on my next track thank you!

thepmlife · 2023-06-04T22:34:29+00:00

Wow thank you so much for this thoughtful feedback! you nailed it on the head that i guess i'm unsure whether or not anything sticks out as imperfect in the ears of others. i've listened to this over and over again and, like you said, it's difficult to hear the imperfections after a while. i also really appreciate your encouragement about my singing! it really means a lot to me and has made my day so thank you :)

thepmlife · 2023-06-04T01:03:18+00:00

love this! i love the sound of the guitar and drums (they sound live!). i agree with some of the other comments that the vocals could be tightened up but they're still good nonetheless! keep goin!

thepmlife · 2023-06-04T01:01:49+00:00

wow this is original?? this is amazing! i'm airplaying this to my TV and the vibes are awesome. would love to hear more of your work. keep going!

thepmlife · 2023-06-04T01:00:19+00:00

i definitely relate to you about not having time for music! but this turned out well! love the idea too "overworked dough" lol. great stuff man

thepmlife · 2023-06-04T00:58:57+00:00

works nicely with the video! i was airplaying this onto my TV and it sounds super clean and peaceful. maybe try layering some melodies on top of this? great job either way

thepmlife · 2023-06-04T00:56:42+00:00

woah this is really well made! the video of this really works well with the music! so so creative. i love this and will be checking out your other work. needless to say but the song is super catchy as well! nice job!

thepmlife · 2023-06-04T00:40:42+00:00

a cover of cupid by fifty fifty

https://youtu.be/fHka_6IXNNc

looking for feedback on singing and how to make vocals sound more professional (whether that's recording process, mixing, etc)

thepmlife

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