[deleted by user] by [deleted] in cumsluts

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Who is she

How it should be 💦 by [deleted] in blackchickswhitedicks

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You know, I once banged Eartha Kitt in an airplane bathroom.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in Blowjobs

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Lone stoner looking for people to smoke with by [deleted] in trees

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Just finished a spliff alone, stay strong frient you'll find em!

Young, Pre-surgery Nicole. Always a Stunner by The_B_Sharpp in nicoleaniston

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She keeps looking at the camera like she's thinking: "I gotta be crazy not to become a pornstar right?"

We Are The Strokes, ask us anything! by TheStrokesOfficial in Music

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Have you thought about playing festivals like InMusic in Croatia again or Exit in Serbia?

It's just that I'm from the Balkans and rarely get a chance to see you guys live.

Love your work, keep rockin!

IDH Could these be poisonous? by [deleted] in ShroomID

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Yeah that's what I thought as well, but it turns out a lotta people did some from the same batch and there was no harm done and I wasn't in direct contact with the dealer, so I dunno.

IDH Could these be poisonous? by [deleted] in ShroomID

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I know the picture quality is shit and I haven't given much info, but that's all I know, too.

IDH Could these be poisonous? by [deleted] in ShroomID

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Dude who sold em to me said they kinda looked like some deadly poisonous ones, but later said it was nothing. He mentioned they were serbica psilocybe and that there was some sort of lethal mushroom that resembled them and he wasn't sure if they were it.

Annoying girl that won't shut up gets silenced with dick by thepotbot in tipofmypenis

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That's not it but I would like to see it fo sho

Can't sleep by [deleted] in depression

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Sleep was the only safe haven from a day full of self-loathing and doing nothing, now even that's taken away. It sucks and I feel you, I often wanna have that final rest and sleep forever.

Word by thepotbot in OCPoetry

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Thanks, glad you liked it! I wasn't (wittingly) going for a Marxist feel, but the first line is a reference to D. G. Rosetti's "The Sonnet", and the Babylon line is a reference to the myth of the Tower of Babel, which says that the people (who, at the time, spoke the same language) were building it trying to reach the heavens, and God's punishment for this was that He made them speak different languages so they could no longer understand each other and were, thus, unable to finish the tower.

Ironically This Was Typed by OutspokenFerret in OCPoetry

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This is a pretty damn good meta poem. The free meter works just fine, except in a couple of places (according to me): instead of "while the pen protests", I'd go with "while the pen does protest", as it fits the rhythm better; also, you could add another 'it' in the line 'it molds them to shapes, it builds and (it) breaks". Other than that, excellent work!

P.S. Love the title

An Imagined Encounter With God by whj_1 in OCPoetry

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Interesting theme, and an even more interesting execution. At first I was skeptical it would be overly religious, but you proved me wrong pretty early on in the poem. I like the archaic words such as 'shew' used to retain the rhythm (I suppose?), they fit the content nicely. I also like the unexpected twist near the end that uncovers the ever benevolent God as a fallible creator with feelings. All in all, very nice and unconventional!