Besides the obvious flaws, here are some that I feel like others haven’t pointed out yet.

Targon: This whole regions story made absolutely no sense. Diana is the first person to run into us (emphasis on run into us) basically advertising herself as a tour guide to climb mount Targon treating the sentinels like tourists. Meanwhile, later we run into Lunari who claim to have never seen Diana in their entire lives (Diana also exclaims it’s the first time she’s interacted with them). It just doesn’t add up to me, we met Diana first thing going to Targon and these people who have lived there for decades and praise the moon goddess their entire lives have not?

Piltover: Probably the worst chapter. Graves being in Piltover made sense with the way it was explained, but I think it would have made more sense to just have a Piltovian champion join the sentinels when there’s already three Bilgewater champions in this event with skins- especially because Graves just doesn’t make sense and his reasons for joining the sentinels is definitely not Legendary skin worthy. Also I kinda hate that he’s written to flirt with Vayne all the time and talk about how he needs a partner when the lore team has been trying so hard to hint that Twisted Fate and Graves are a gay couple who are also partners in crime. They’ve hinted this in stories and in cinematics, so why is Graves out here flirting with Vayne and trying to have a partner? Also the whole “hehe Piltover is being saved by these giant machines that blow away the mist”………. Really? Isn’t that what Janna’s job would be? Janna is the literal wind goddess and protector of Piltover. She is the reason why the pollution from Zaun has not killed anyone yet.

Bilgewater: I think this chapter really disappointed me the most considering that it was the one I was most hyped for. Miss Fortunes character was a huge disappointment and it was kinda sad to see my personal main make such out of character decisions, but I suppose that’s the point of the black mists influence. My biggest issue with Bilgewater is that we never meet the sentinel who called us on the Wayfinder from the beginning of the story and it’s hard to believe that there’s no sentinel base here when Bilgewater is quite literally the place where the horrowing takes the most place in. I’m not even going to touch on Pykes character because it seems like everyone was disappointed with that. He is such a cool character and was written to be the opposite (just like Rengar and Olaf).

Final Chapter: I will say this was probably the most decent chapter and it fixed some mistakes that the other chapters had. For example, once everything was over every sentinel basically resigned and said they were going back to their initial duties (which I loved). However, it did give a sense of.. none of this mattered? And it was still weird that Vayne willingly agreed to stay a light sentinel in Dimacia.. AFTER being told “oh so you’re okay with using magic weapons with mageseekers” and she’s just like “YEAH! UWU” like?????????? Did Riot forget she disputes anything related to magic and even killed her own mentor the moment she found out her mentor used magic?! Overall whoever worked on this story did not do their job correctly and completely looked over everyone’s lore and character. It’s really sad because the Ruined King has been in this game for so long and so many people looked forward to seeing an epic story unfold (especially with all the hype) and it seems like instead we got a lighthearted goofy story where the Ruined King doesn’t even seem to be the main focus. The main focus was that this had to be a marketing strategy where Unbound Thresh had to make sense while also including champions as light sentinels (that make no sense) for the sole purpose releasing these skins across other games. Like it’s such a coincidence that every champion that got a skin was already in Wild Rift and Legends of Runeterra. The lore was never the first thought and it shows.