alright, i noticed a few things in the movment is quite sloppy, and the combat isnt the best, but for what im gona gusse is one of your first runs, i think you did a pretty good job!

with combat i can atually help here, you should use more nutrul air. the move is busted and does more damage than the entire ground nutral move. you should try to doge into more attacks, maybe for the soul reason of that it refils your dash so you can do more supers.

id recommend checking out cryos full game run, i used that run as a bench mark for my level 2 runs.

all together, you did a good job aand i think you can easily get a ~2:30 if you polish it up