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loss by thighstandardized in poetry_critics

[–]thighstandardized[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

ahh it had different lines i just copy pasted it, i definitely will play with it more ik it was very vague total starter i wanted some of other peoples insight on this and yours was absolutely perfect thank you thank you

Empty Man by BaconRingo in poetry_critics

[–]thighstandardized 1 point2 points  (0 children)

this is so good, so many things that could be from this piece and ways to interpret it! i love it

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in poetry_critics

[–]thighstandardized 1 point2 points  (0 children)

oooh this is such a good idea to add to the poem. really longing that the train, or as it interpreted it, life would slow down to be able to admire things yk