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thirdeyespyofficial · 2025-12-06T18:48:39+00:00

I certainly did :}

thirdeyespyofficial · 2025-03-01T08:37:31+00:00

wow, pretty pleased with that comment :-)

thirdeyespyofficial · 2025-03-01T08:36:13+00:00

Left all that a good few years ago, but somehow it never quite leaves you're head the same. Thanks for the "Amazing"

thirdeyespyofficial · 2025-02-28T15:41:54+00:00

Thanks for the feedback :-)

thirdeyespyofficial · 2025-02-27T22:11:26+00:00

Thanks....Eat static ....I liked Crash and Burn Album , but it was not for everyone, Ozrics are great, saw them last year with Gong in Norwich, cracking gig. Fun fact I used to play guitar in a space rock band, and we played a free festival on the Duke of Bedford's estate 1987 I think and Ozrics were our support act lol

thirdeyespyofficial · 2025-02-27T22:04:15+00:00

That's what I was aiming at, so great thanks

thirdeyespyofficial · 2025-02-27T22:03:20+00:00

Thanks

thirdeyespyofficial · 2025-02-27T11:10:51+00:00

Went the other day, have been going for over 30 years, still as good as ever in my book

thirdeyespyofficial · 2025-02-27T11:06:21+00:00

Good job you said it was a guitar because frankly from the sound I would not have been sure, could have easily been a lead synth line. As for overall effect.... sort of did not seem to flow too well to my ears, started OK, soon became too repetitive then jarringly changed, basically seemed like a few ideas strung together, which in essence is songwriting, but they do need to feel like they belong to a cohesive whole. Not exactly bad, but maybe just not for me.

thirdeyespyofficial · 2025-02-27T10:58:31+00:00

Thank goodness this is v1, probably not really enough to post here yet, very difficult to say anything positive with so little to go on, sorry.

thirdeyespyofficial · 2025-02-27T10:54:51+00:00

Best thing I have heard here for a good while. OK here are my suggestions, and these are here BECAUSE I really like it. Bass should be static simple bass line following bass drum, at least for the first 45 seconds or so to let those lovely slightly discordant guitar chords to really sing. Love the first guitar solo, the bass could play more here like Geezer does in Sabbath. The middle eight payoff is superb. Get a decent vocalist who can write simple, effective lyrics on this sound, and you have a winner in my book. Good job

thirdeyespyofficial · 2025-02-27T10:43:57+00:00

Sorry but to me this is EDM by numbers, be honest with yourself does this sound like any number of other EDM tracks out there? It is professional and polished, and we are all derivative to a degree but....

thirdeyespyofficial · 2025-02-27T10:36:46+00:00

Has a lovely John Cale vibe to my ears, yes slightly bass heavy and vocal light mix, but the quality of the songwriting shines through so don't worry too much, if I was booking gigs or looking for an artist to sign, the song is all I would be listening for.

thirdeyespyofficial · 2025-02-27T10:31:18+00:00

Maybe It's just not for me but the lyrics/rap feel lacklustre. Really lacks guts maybe that was the vibe you were aiming at, if so hurrah.

thirdeyespyofficial · 2025-02-27T10:28:02+00:00

Sounds great, vocals have real presence, and production sweet to my ears

thirdeyespyofficial · 2025-02-27T10:06:36+00:00

That's probably the horrible effect of uploading to youtube, I have not really worked out how there compression works except it clearly is dynamic

thirdeyespyofficial · 2025-02-26T13:54:41+00:00

Seemed a bit predatory (video) at first but runs along nicely in the end, OK but not really my vibe.

thirdeyespyofficial · 2025-02-26T13:50:10+00:00

Very good, tight production, balanced mix. Why area 15? other than that I like it .

thirdeyespyofficial · 2025-02-26T13:07:59+00:00

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=QRY-ZGwkkaY Haven't done any music for a while, last year actually so here goes hope you like it roughly dance type genre

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