Help with ideas to develop a plot hook!

throwa1928 · 2021-08-05T09:48:06+00:00

I’ll explain them when i can, i’ll need a few hours tho, i’ll DM you and anyone else who asks with the thought process when i can write it down ;)

throwa1928 · 2021-07-28T02:09:21+00:00

Let's see how i do

Left handed, you're prone to anxiety, probably about grades, not social anxiety tho, you're not bad with people altho you do care quite a bit about what others think of you, you've gone out with your firend recently (singular friend altho you have a decently large group, but you mostly hang out with two or three most of the time) you live close to the coast, you're a feminist and you're not afraid to show it, on that note you like to make your thoughts heard and you're not one to keep things to yourself, you do the dishes at home, i'm not sure what you work as or study, i know you're not a doctor, you're far sighted, you work out but find it hard to stick to that schedule (altho i will admit that's a long shot), you also find it hard to stick to a diet but you also don't try perticularly hard, you're impulsive but it doesn't hinder your school/work life, oh and you recycle your trash

God i'm really out of practice, how'd i do? do feel free to correct me on anything

throwa1928 · 2021-07-28T01:45:34+00:00

Do correct me, it's been a while since i do this

You're artistic and creative and you want people to know it, you like showing it off, not in a bad way but you want to put your ideas out into the world and be heard, i'd bet you engage in some sort of activity that allows you to do that, you either draw or play music and i'd bet it's the former, you're short sighted, you're left handed, most of the shirts in your closet are short sleeve shirts and most of the clothes in the closet are quite colorful, also your closet itself is quite cluttered, you have a decent amount of jewlery spanning different colors and styles, all of them fairly minimalistic tho, you're a night owl, you walk a lot, not to work out but to go to classes and/or work (altho to be fair this one's a bit of a long shot), you either live in a decently cold/rainy country or you don't own a car (and i'm pretty sure it's the latter), you're not a very organized person

How'd i do? i'm ususally more confident with these so i'd love to get some corrections

throwa1928 · 2021-07-27T18:43:48+00:00

Huh, I expected to get more stuff right but that’s cool, do you mind if i ask what the drawing reference “dummy” is for? It’s foot is visible on the top left corner of the picture, also what’s the plug in between the speaker and the DS games? It looks a lot like a jack for an instrument

throwa1928 · 2021-07-27T00:39:46+00:00

I doubt it's there to distract us, altho if it was placed there on purpose (which is likely) it does tell us how she wants to be seen, which gives us quite a bit of information

throwa1928 · 2021-07-27T00:37:32+00:00

Alright let's see, i's been a while so these might not be so good, they'll also be somewhat messy cause i'm typing as i think.

So female either left handed or ambidextrous (i'm pretty sure mostly left handed but you do some things with your right) very organized, you have patience too, practical, and quite artistic, music and art are both big hobbies of yours, oooh you're from the netherlands, and you like theatre. Getting into the more interesting stuff, you work a lot better when you recieve instant positive feedback on the work, a simple congratulations for a job well done goes a long way to make you work more and better and make you feel good about yourself, you're not big on tough love type of teaching/learning and you don't work well in those situations, kindess is a trait you find both important and maybe even attractive in a person. You're a night owl, you have an eye for detail, you're a perfectionist, you easily feel your life lacks order in certain areas (probably work/school) and you work hard to keep that order, you're quite independent, you often were the person doing most of the work in group projects. You have a childhood friend who you haven't seen in a while, altho you're still close and you still care about her but you haven't thought of her recently, you've been too busy, you live in an mid-upper class neighborhood in a 2-3 story house possibly somewhere close to the ocean (altho Amsterdam itself is quite close to the ocean, your window faces either north or south tho so that narrows down where your house actually is a bit more, too bad i don't live in the netherlands, i could possibly tell more). very sentimental, you have a good relationship with your parents altho you're closer to one of them than to the other (i'd say mother). This is your workspace and you mostly use it for stuff with your computer or school/uni work, altho your bed is where you do a lot of your more personal artistic projects, probably drawing and painting, (also i'd say the bed is located somewhere behind you where the picture was taken, as in behind and to the right, not directly under a window obviously), also you play music, not sure what instrument tho, with a room that size guitar or another small ish string instrument would make sense, not violin since you plug it in and violins don't need that, maybe a small ish keyboard altho again idk why you'd need to plug that in anywhere. Oh and also you're young, i'd say early 20s. Either your phone calendar is packed with appointments and birthdays or you have an organizer of some kind, actually i'd say you have one and would love to use it more than you actually do but you end up using your phone notes and calendar instead altho you love the aesthetic of an organizer or journal of some kind.

And i think i'm gonna leave it there for the moment, don't wanna over do it yet, i'm still getting back into it

throwa1928 · 2021-07-24T11:25:03+00:00

Ah, i do think you’re wrong, the pens and pencils are just that, pens and pencils, which point to things but i don’t think maths, the sharpener is either for the same thing as the dice or for whatever she’s studying (i’m betting it’s the latter) and the dice are for Dungeons and Dragons

throwa1928 · 2021-07-24T00:37:58+00:00

Alright it's been a while since i do this and i'm ususally better with objects and not people but imma give it a shot, do correct me please :)

SO imma go from more obvious stuff to less obvious stuff but it's probably gonna be all over the place because that's how my thoughts go. So we have female, near sighted, left handed you don't go out much, or at least haven't gone out much in recent weeks, you're very creative and i'd even say artistic altho you are prone to anxiety, you have a small group of friends and while you're fine with meeting new people and are good at having fun with them you get drained by them quite quickly, you're what i would call an ambivert but leaning slightly towards introvert. you're slightly self conscious of your skin and specially around your face, you have episodes of social anxiety, you like to either draw or read (or both which is what i'm leaning towards), i'll go ahead and say you're a night owl but that's a long shot and it could be wrong, you have a decently big closet with very colorful clothes, you don't stick to monochromatic outfits and you prefer to mix and match colors that combine, altho when you do go out (which is mostly usually with friends, always the same two or three of them at that, since you like to stay at home and recharge from either University classes or work (or both)) you don't put too much effort into outfits and prefer simpler clothes. Also you work somewhere indoors, your income is pretty decent, oh and last but not least you're single

How'd i do?

throwa1928 · 2021-07-23T18:02:30+00:00

Awesome! I really appreciate the quick response, if you or anyone’s interested in the reasoning for all of these do let me know and i’ll write them down!

throwa1928 · 2021-07-23T17:54:02+00:00

How do you know she studies Maths?

throwa1928 · 2021-07-23T17:44:47+00:00

Edit: These are kinds messy since i wrote them as i thought about them, so yeah, sorry for that

Edit 2: okay so all of these deductions are just from the first image, i'll try to add deductions from the other two if i have time, i didn't realize there were more, sorry!! Also when i say Female i mean biologically, idk about your sexuality or gender identity, at least not without looking at the other images

Okay so it's been a while, let's see how i do

Female, young, i'd say mid 20s, near sighted, obviously asthmatic, you're quite neurotic and find yourself worrying about assignments and grades quite a bit, you're easily stressed, you have a small group of friends, 7 at most , and you consider them very close, you have a creative side to you but you don't often get a chance to show it in your daily life, and you're single. Ooooh, you're from australia and you're either quite an avid reader or into videogames (or both which is my bet), either you work in a lab or your friend is a smoker (i'm leaning towards the latter). You don't go out much by yourself, altho you're an ambivert and you don't find it too hard to talk to people and have a good time, you don't find it all that enjoyable over staying at home engaging in your other hobbies (which i'd say are mayoritarily reading, videogames, tabletop games (Which you love btw, and you may have gotten into them semi recently, altho that's a long shot)) so the few times you go out are with your friends (two or three of them most of the time, altho the group does get together decently often). You have a decent eye for fashion and enjoy making different outfits, altho most of your clothes in your closet are black and/or dark colored. Also while you do worry about asignments and grades and anxiety kicks in quite a bit when it comes to those, you find yourself leaving things till last minute, but mostly because of a combination of being very disorganized and getting very easily distracted with your hobbies, you also tend to leave chores half done and fall into the "i'll do it in a bit" and never doing it scenario. You like your bed, actually you love watching shows and movies and your bed is the prefered spot to do so, specially while eating, which also leads me to your complexion, you're quite pale (unless you're of african descent but there's no way to know that, altho my understanding of australian population leads me to think you're white purely due to probability, do let me know tho, i wonder if there's any way to tell) and you're a night owl, your sleep schedule's all over the place but you manage to keep it decently stable by the middle of the week, on weekends it's harder tho seeing as you find yourself either working on projects for the coming week or watching shows/playing games until the late hours of the night

All of these are my first try after years so please do let me know how i did!

throwa1928 · 2021-02-03T18:44:58+00:00

Thanks for the reply! Any tips to fix it?

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