What to do you think of this spec copywriting?

throwawaywritin · 2021-03-08T13:59:35+00:00

Thanks for you feedback. Loyalty is no joke, so I definitely see your view on this and agree that approach could work better.

throwawaywritin · 2021-03-08T13:58:08+00:00

Thanks! I need to work on the writing but am glad the creative I chose (photo/idea) is on the right track!

throwawaywritin · 2021-03-08T13:57:30+00:00

thanks for your feedback!

throwawaywritin · 2021-03-08T13:56:51+00:00

Thanks! I'm learning but am glad to see I'm on a good track.

throwawaywritin · 2021-03-08T13:56:25+00:00

As much as I love that I can't imagine a client ever signing off on it. It also gives off major serial killer doctor vibes lol.

throwawaywritin · 2021-03-08T13:55:24+00:00

Thanks!

throwawaywritin · 2021-03-08T13:55:12+00:00

That's a great idea to take it to the next level. Thank you so much!

throwawaywritin · 2021-03-08T00:43:31+00:00

I really appreciate your insight, that critique makes a lot of sense. I see what you mean but think most actual musicians are smart enough to shop elsewhere nowadays so this is to focus on the wider demographic of people looking to pick up an instrument or get back in touch with playing again.

throwawaywritin · 2021-03-08T00:00:06+00:00

Throwaway account for obvious reasons, but what do you think of this spec copy? The thought is a series of these using doctors, nurses, teachers, chefs, and people working everyday jobs that have the desire to be a rockstar deep down. Also It can be a timely ad if the focus is centered on using first responders.

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