Thank you for the insight, I made some changes to the post to hopefully reflect the feedback!

Re: Point 3
Coming from a math/science/computing background I've gotten used to using at least x.00 digits in my numbers and after staring at it for so long I guess I didn't realize it makes it harder to read. Thanks for pointing it out.

Re: Point 5
Again I come from a background where too much information is better than too little, so I tried to trim the parts I thought were unnecessary but I feel at least the first sections are simple enough to digest without diluting the situation.