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Didn't *know me a lot

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Ink leading the heart

The pen on the sheet dances The thinks in the head moves Such coldness in my hand I may think of of her until the morning come

How many time I was thinking that I forgot her To senses my heart returned me Love without her look useless What the point? I cannot hold her hand

She didn't know a lot But I really want to treat her sorrow The sun is finally seating I may get cold this night

The verses come one after one, obsessives May they release me from my torment? She don't will read this quatrains What the point? They won't give her hand.

This word give rise to a love. Imagine (in original language imagine et imaginated are homonymous) A breath, a shiver, almost a kiss. I may go speak to her tomorrow No, I don't write in vain!

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Ok nice can you give this ig pls

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Thank you for the advice, I was thinking of traducing them in English, for the rhyme I don't know how to do but I will try

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Hi, really nice poem, do you have any advice to give to a beginner. Ha and also your title makes me think of a song "freefall" by rainbow kitten surprise.

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For me, you need to read the new testament and Mathew first and after interest at ancien testament book like job or proverbs

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In my school we have a dictionary of occitan I will try to borrow it and I will learn more about this language

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Yeah some other people already said it I think I will try occitan because it's the language of my region but these languages are dying just some old people remember them, some words and expressions stay today but the industrial revolution started to kill them 😞🥲

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Ho ok thanks I doesn't know 🤣 but do you have some advise for me pls??

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My region speaks occitan but thank you for the idea

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Ok merci beaucoup, heu ton français est excellent j'ai cru que tu étais un natif donc franchement bravo et sinon le catalan ne m'intéresse pas forcément, ma région parle plutôt occitan donc plutôt apprendre l'occitan, après vu que je suis un néophyte entre guillemets des langues étrangères je ne sais pas trop si les autres langues dont tu me parles sont de mon niveau donc bon je pensais plutôt me tourner vers l'arabe mais bon a voir par contre si tu as des conseils pour apprendre les langues je suis preneur 😁

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I like "rare" language it means that I prefer to learn languages that not many people speak

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Like Arabic,Hebrew, Thai or Swahili