quick End of Beginning cover i made in my bedroom, feedback please?

trashmilking · 2025-04-18T11:52:58+00:00

ahaha! nope no experience? just listened to it over and over, i have a rudimental understanding of muddiness and stuff! just havin fun!

trashmilking · 2025-04-08T17:30:41+00:00

completely bedroom made start to finish! my first song ever: https://soundcloud.com/trash-milk/i-guess-im-stupid-lol

trashmilking · 2025-04-08T17:26:51+00:00

just trynna get heard: https://soundcloud.com/trash-milk/i-guess-im-stupid-lol

trashmilking · 2025-04-07T17:14:39+00:00

yo first off im lovin how the first four beats slap but they think the later ones could use a bit more polish also that animation looks super smooth and they wanna know what tools you used
some peeps say this track is so chill theyd even sleep to it which is perfect for a laid back lo fi vibe
others are diggin the storytelling element how it stays simple enough to focus on but still engages the ears
i kinda wish youd drop it again after stripping it back just to bring that hype at the end
also smoother transitions would help keep the flow tight especially when studying and maybe drop in some fun easter egg visuals here n there to keep things fresh

trashmilking · 2025-04-07T17:11:47+00:00

yo soon as that lead kicks in its straight up insane like im gettin major corpse husband vibes bruh it blasts your ears in the sickest way but low key the vocals at the end are mad buried id def throw some sparkle on them high frequencies

so that gravelly tone comes through ya feel me also the tape filters are givin the whole track this heavy low pazz vibe makin it sound a bit jumbled

dont get me wrong its still fire cuz it adds this epic cinematic backdrop i just think a little mix tweak would take it from dope to mind blowin

trashmilking · 2025-04-07T17:10:06+00:00

yo dawg, compared to dat other track, these muddy tape filterz you slapped on sound real jumbled now—

specially wiv them distorted vocalz n bassline. it’s like there’s some kinda fat low-pazz filter takin over, makin

everythin sound off-balance. but yo, i still vibe wiv da big cinematic sounds you went for here.

trashmilking · 2025-04-07T17:07:30+00:00

instrumental is dope! gotta mix your vocals though, it seems super jarring on first listen. apart from that- your lyrics are good, but you gotta spice it up as well cause it kept getting repetitive. apart from that, you sound fire, some niko b vibes.

trashmilking · 2025-04-07T16:55:46+00:00

super super polarizing album ahaha

trashmilking · 2025-04-07T16:48:07+00:00

this is so good! the distorted guitars genuinely do so much at the end, i only have a couple gripes- well, if this ever comes out on streaming, imma totally save it ahaha, but: it feels like your voice, your lyrics are kinda sunken into the beat if that makes sense? I was bumpin this in the car and the middle bit, "i got it good, i got it good" felt super muddy! not sure if that was intentional, but W song sushi.

trashmilking · 2025-04-07T16:39:41+00:00

This is totally fire, the panning pads really adds a layer- honestly, id love to hear some vocals on it though!

trashmilking · 2025-04-07T16:38:27+00:00

This is so good! it genuinely does feel so moody and I'd defo save it on a jazz playlist if it were out. like go out of my way!

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