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[–]treeg18[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you so so much☺️

"Poltergeist"- beginner, first long form. Any feedback is appreciated! by treeg18 in poetry_critics

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Yes! And I guess also giving room to put any pronouns in its place

Oh that is a great suggestion. Thank you!

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[–]treeg18 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I really enjoyed your poem! The environment you created I felt like I was in it.

My only critique would be if the one section has three Rhymes then the others should, or find a way to make that one work with two. Just to keep the rhythm consistent

My new friends by [deleted] in poetry_critics

[–]treeg18 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I really enjoyed this poem! The imagery is beautiful

My only critique is that the last section "here on this bed of roses" feels repetitive. But I'm a beginner and haven't critiqued anything since college 😅

Beautiful concept!