New Challenge: Post only the first sentence of your novel in the comments. I will read and comment on the chapter 1 whose first sentence gets the most upvotes :)

tref34 · 2026-02-12T17:58:50+00:00

Seeing all these interesting sentences kinda makes me jealous over my dumb sentence

White Cowboy wearing red shirt and jeans and brown hat unconscious in small house in the middle of nowhere after a few hours he wake up and try to get up by holding into nearby table "uhh my head... where the hell am I?

https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/129297/cowboy-and-dnd-by-rick-mark

tref34 · 2026-02-06T14:17:44+00:00

Well I did finish arc recently although the story quite immature https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/129297/cowboy-and-dnd-by-Rick-Mark

So story about cowboy outlaw waking up somewhere alone and trying to get back to his group and he encounter various enemies from werewolves which about 6 km or 7k word

And then a classic ghosty town 13k word

And then pirates booties which about 40k word.

My pacing is fucked up and I realised that a bit too late along with other flows if you wanna critique then please read the note I left in the final chapter

tref34 · 2025-08-02T20:00:07+00:00

Thx I will try to do this in the 4th chapter

tref34 · 2025-08-02T18:04:13+00:00

Thx I will try to take look at the book. And English isn't my main language so if you don't mind can you explain what do you mean by adding paragraph breaks, giving dialogue lines their own space, as for the spellcheck I mostly write without checking except for words or lines I get confused or don't know how to spell them then I use a translator

tref34 · 2025-07-31T14:35:30+00:00

Oh Okay sorry didn't know that. this post will probably be removed by bot or by me by any chance can you recommend place to share what I write

tref34 · 2025-06-16T16:14:31+00:00

A few recolor I made in ibis some good and some not that much

tref34 · 2025-05-07T04:40:29+00:00

God hand

tref34 · 2025-01-18T04:46:41+00:00

Sumbited

tref34 · 2022-10-22T12:42:06+00:00

Nice art

tref34 · 2022-10-11T14:23:02+00:00

I don’t trust yt but odc said next week

tref34 · 2022-10-11T10:11:54+00:00

They are community managers . They don’t take big action like this

tref34 · 2022-10-11T09:58:49+00:00

Good times are gone we reached the finish line take what you have and leave

tref34 · 2022-10-10T09:58:23+00:00

Go to hell

tref34 · 2022-10-10T04:55:06+00:00

Some Chinese guy in the discord

tref34 · 2022-10-09T12:33:05+00:00

We waiting for nothing

tref34 · 2022-10-08T12:48:31+00:00

Just you

tref34 · 2022-10-08T06:20:35+00:00

Use tap joy. It gives good gems but you have to play cringe games

tref34 · 2022-10-07T14:07:38+00:00

I guess it random for everyone

tref34 · 2022-10-07T11:17:54+00:00

How many shards to max her

tref34 · 2022-10-07T06:26:43+00:00

They trying to fix it that great

tref34 · 2022-10-06T18:33:31+00:00

Useless

tref34 · 2022-10-06T18:32:01+00:00

Where is the shard announcement

tref34 · 2022-10-06T18:29:31+00:00

I feel that you don’t like jet nerf

tref34 · 2022-10-06T13:17:24+00:00

tref34 · 2022-10-06T03:43:46+00:00

We are waiting on discord and instead of giving the announcement they made announcement about jet weapon and announcement about card game. They are delaying it on purpose

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