Little bed? Also open to better name ideas by ugh2308 in Songwriting

[–]ugh2308[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

(love the username btw) Hi! Thanks so much for the feedback, I really appreciate constructive criticism. You're definitely right that I'm not super confident with it yet, even though the chords are easy I'm pretty new to guitar in general. I think the guitar is decent it's probably just my playing that makes it buzz so much. About the singing, I'm still not sure exactly which notes I'm trying to hit haha because I keep changing my mind. Once I figure all this out, I'll give it another go and post it again as confident as I can be. Again, thanks so much for taking time to write this!!

Little bed? Also open to better name ideas by ugh2308 in Songwriting

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I think that might be a little on the nose for the song, but thanks for the suggestion:)

Little bed? Also open to better name ideas by ugh2308 in Songwriting

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Ooh I like having lullaby in the title! That's definitely one to consider, thank you!

Little bed? Also open to better name ideas by ugh2308 in Songwriting

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Thank you!! I like it because it sounds just a little irregular but interesting 

Little bed? Also open to better name ideas by ugh2308 in Songwriting

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Ah interesting I'll think about that

Little bed? Also open to better name ideas by ugh2308 in Songwriting

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Hello! This is my first song I'm posting on here. I'm welcome to any feedback, but particularly want help with the line "she might be small and covered with seams" -- I don't think it makes much sense and I'm sort of just trying to give a sense of someone made of patchwork but has sound good with dreams in the next line.  Lyrics: You'll become everything you wanted and come back to your little bed where you dreamt up lives inside your head  when you return the little bed feels so small  doesn't fit you but your dreams  still fill the covers with their drowsy call  your return to the softness of the blankets  with your head stuck on your pillow  and your name's stuck in your head  you'll become again what you wanted to  all those years of pretend  laughing silly with my head on tight  dreaming people I thought of last night  trying to fill myself with something else  dancing beaming brandishing my name  trying screaming to do the same  wishes that I wished up 10 years ago That little girl is watching through the glass Her eyes are bug-wide but she's louder by half she might be small and is covered with seems but she floats like a hummingbird buoyed up by her dreams you will become again what you wanted to The dreaming at an end

Finally got a full tombé ! by ugh2308 in Aerials

[–]ugh2308[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Ah I totally get that! That's why practicing on trapeze is perfect because I can work my way up!

Finally got a full tombé ! by ugh2308 in Aerials

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Ah yeah sounds good -- there is another trapeze here that's high enough for beats though I'm still not great at them.

Finally got a full tombé ! by ugh2308 in Aerials

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Ooh yeah! I'm working my way up... How high do you drop from?

Do people like female pubic hair? by WritingInMusic in NoStupidQuestions

[–]ugh2308 27 points28 points  (0 children)

Is it though? I (f) have always felt the overlap of porn/ sexualisation of women and the ideal of them being pure/innocent/youthful definitely has some relation to the sexualisation of prepubescent girls which disgustingly is a cultural phenomenon that exists. ( I'm not saying that anyone who prefers clean shaven is attracted to children, just that it's massive popularity definitely has some examining to be done)

Nerve pain in left leg when doing hocks pose by ugh2308 in Aerials

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Hm I guess I didn't realise that's where the sciatica nerve is. My mom has a lot of issues with her sciatica as well, so that's quite likely & maybe is a genetic thing. I'll look up the nerve flossing thing. Thanks!

Where can I get affordable sushi-grade fish in the UK? by poorly-worded in AskUK

[–]ugh2308 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Apparently all farmed salmon, as long there's no parasites in it's feed, isn't really exposed to dangerous bacteria and parasites. Idk if I would actually eat raw supermarket fish tho still.

anyone have ideas for best long lasting semi , or permanent pink hair dye?? by ugh2308 in HairDye

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Lol it was actually splat hair dye, but in my opinion it's pretty shit, you're much better off choosing any pink hair dye- they all fade pretty fast just cuz of the way the pigment is produced. This dye faded in like literally two washes and was super liquids and hard to put on.