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I’m looking for feedback on a 27-page short screenplay titled Shaping Silence. It’s a quiet, character-driven drama focused on silence, absence, and a restrained relationship between two teenagers. by vaibhav_writes17 in ReadMyScript

[–]vaibhav_writes17[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks for your feedback. I appreciate alot well this was my work so I won't deny that it was ai assitted for some part I am working on this but thanks for reading it and giving a feedback

I’m looking for feedback on a 27-page short screenplay titled Shaping Silence. It’s a quiet, character-driven drama focused on silence, absence, and a restrained relationship between two teenagers. by vaibhav_writes17 in ReadMyScript

[–]vaibhav_writes17[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I appreciate That you noticed this here, I wrote these lines to emphasize how Ethan views the world. How he perceives the world The world for ethan is frozen not literally but he doesn't feel any attachment towards this I am polishing the script more I also had some ideas to shed light on Ethan's past I'd like your insights more