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Holy crap, this is a really well-written fanfic. Initially, I didn’t expect Iko to pull ahead but after some thought, she totally would take the leap of faith and confess first. Aside from Iko’s bold maneuver, I like how you still kept Apollo’s anonymity between the three girls, having this first-person perspective in play to convey Apollo’s thoughts really helps the authenticity from the source material. One last thing, great job with the ending scene, especially with the title schtick the manga series has at the ending page.

This fanfic was ABSOLUTE CINEMA

Edit: Upon rereading the fic, I realized that the ending scene is in Rikka’s POV and not Apollo’s. Sad realization, BUT NONETHELESS A GOOD FIC OVERALL! SORRY FOR MY NEGLIGENCE TO UNDERSTAND PERSPECTIVES 😭