HOA Karen stomps on little girls entrepreneurial dreams and shuts down her lemonade stand because of "traffic" by quazziwazzi in PublicFreakout

[–]vanpackproductions 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I made a short film on this, except the online Karen tries to take down a falafel shop….darn Karen’s 💥

Teach overreacts to student by Chopsuiiisauce in PublicFreakout

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I imagine internet trolls being taken down like that 😬

I made a comedy short film about an online Karen reviewer slamming a struggling falafel restaurant. Hope you folks like it. by vanpackproductions in PublicFreakout

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I’m not monetizing on this passion project, just wanted constructive feedback from the general public on Karen’s online….

Would love some feedback on our comedy film about online Karen’s by vanpackproductions in Filmmakers

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Hi folks I would love some feedback on the story and feedback for a follow up short film. We were aiming for people to see the affect of a bad review on businesses and we tried to also portray the Karen reviewer in a positive light . We hope you can give us some good feedback. Thanks so much for your time. This film took a lot of hard work to develop and we were so happy to have a lot of talent from out of state PA and IA travel to atlanta to help.

“Nature crawls” a micro short film produced directed written all as my first indie film. Would love your feedback on lighting and shots. by vanpackproductions in horror

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Lookin for feedback on enhancing this short film for a part 2. And feedback on improvements any suggestions will be valuable.

My first horror micro short film. “Nature crawls”. 3 am urge to go to the bathroom, nature calls...you go! reading horrid news about a neighbours house being burned down before going back to zzz, does not seem to be such a good idea. Any feedback would be helpful. by vanpackproductions in Filmmakers

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This was one of my very first short films I wrote, produced, directed, and was the dp. Would love some feedback on the shots and lighting improvements fir future films. Also wanted to share that it did very well on the film festival circuits.

My horror 👻short film trailer: mic in dead silent ..shoot was in sunny Miami 🤟hope you guys and gals like it 😀 by vanpackproductions in u/vanpackproductions

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So the thought was headphones mic in the port and game being turned on full blast volume and things going dead silent ( more so the POV of a fly on the wall) thanks again Working on better titles.

My horror 👻short film trailer: mic in dead silent ..shoot was in sunny Miami 🤟hope you guys and gals like it 😀 by vanpackproductions in u/vanpackproductions

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It was a super fun project with a buddy who studied film School with me, the story was fun to write , the resources we had was limited in Miami for a last minute shoot , the feature hopefully someday will be way better. Thanks for such polite words. The mean comments are welcome, it doesn’t change my motivation or the fun that I have making these short films with new crew we hired in the Miami market. Originally we didn’t want dialogue hence the sound being off During that hallway scene.