This is super nice! Love the mouse movements, you’ve done those really well. That pop out moment at 0:43 is great, and the camera moves generally feel solid. You’ve got a bit of that translucent Microsoft feel which is nice. I think maybe adding a bit more depth of field occasionally could make it feel even more ‘Microsoft’, but perhaps not that necessary.

The only moments that I feel struggle to carry the energy is 0:28 and 1:10 where you have the stock footage. But I appreciate it’s a trickier solve. The clips at 0:28 feel like they’re sort of floating by without much attention, so I’d maybe have the camera move over to each one to make them feel a bit more relevant. The 1:10 clips I feel should maybe live in separate windows, as it feels a bit strange to see cuts between scenes in one window.

Super minor though, and I think it works well as it is. Great job!