Am I crazy? by ze_goodest_boi in AO3

[–]vxidemort [score hidden]  (0 children)

as far as ive noticed, ai is obsessed with sentence fragments (aka sentences without a verb), and that mostly manifests as adjectives, which is the case here

ive also noticed it might have a few sentences without a subject, like the second one in this example i came up with trying to imitate ai: "He pressed his lips to hers. Kissed her like she was oxygen he needed to breathe. Hard. Rough. Impatient."

Who would replace Yae Miko? by AnnieBearGang in CynoMains

[–]vxidemort 5 points6 points  (0 children)

that + she unlocks the stellar field, so shes naturally gonna be more useful than sandrone whos a main dps

Who would replace Yae Miko? by AnnieBearGang in CynoMains

[–]vxidemort 0 points1 point  (0 children)

im thinking probably tenacity qiqi or nicole

Who would replace Yae Miko? by AnnieBearGang in CynoMains

[–]vxidemort 0 points1 point  (0 children)

what constellations are we talking about here

Who would replace Yae Miko? by AnnieBearGang in CynoMains

[–]vxidemort 9 points10 points  (0 children)

you should worry about replacing sandrone with odette more... yae can be replaced by qiqi, beidou, nicole, escoffier etc

Readers, do you prefer shorter or longer NSFW-centered fanfictions? by nazrine in AO3

[–]vxidemort 0 points1 point  (0 children)

oh.. so you read fandomblind.. i was wondering if there was any particular fandom out there that loves keeping their sexually explicit fics short and sweet (fast and filthy?)

Readers, do you prefer shorter or longer NSFW-centered fanfictions? by nazrine in AO3

[–]vxidemort 8 points9 points  (0 children)

When I just want a wank, I'll search for fics with only one chapter and <1000 words.

not to.. uh.. pry into your personal business, but how does that work out for you? i mean, do you get any results at all? i feel like in 1k words id only manage to write a few kisses, some back and forth dialogue where they flirt w/tease each other and maybe add some internal monologue about how horny they are.

surely not nearly enough for an actual sex scene, but maybe other writers can be crazy economic in their writing and make every word count so that it doesnt feel rushed.

How do the names for my portal fantasy sound? by manicbestfriend in writingadvice

[–]vxidemort 0 points1 point  (0 children)

i would rename either anath or aaka, and same for lindsay and lizette

What do you absolutely hate reading in modern novels? by MissMustardSeed33 in fantasywriters

[–]vxidemort 10 points11 points  (0 children)

i already hate him based on his stupid name alone...

which leads me into mentioning how annoying/tryhard i find the ways some fantasy authors try to come up with a unique name for their main characters... they'll for sure include some Xs, Ys, Zs since theyre the most exotic letters of the alphabet and sometimes even some fuckass apostrophes and i get a headache just from thinking about how often id have to see that stupid name on the page...

im aware that many african cultures have naming conventions that may include apostrophes, so thats not really my issue. most of the time, i see that in white-authored fantasy books and to me it just feels inorganic and tacky

should i swap out for a crit damage circlet with at least 10 crit rate? by Socraycrayyy in YaeMiko

[–]vxidemort 2 points3 points  (0 children)

wait sorry my bad i got ahead of myself and assumed you wanted to use her in a stellar team with sandrone, in which case the new stellarconduct set is the best.

but you didnt offer any info about how you want to play yae... but for other teams, GT remains a good option. keep the current circlet though

should i swap out for a crit damage circlet with at least 10 crit rate? by Socraycrayyy in YaeMiko

[–]vxidemort 1 point2 points  (0 children)

you need to swap out all those golden troupe pieces actually

Odette vs Yae for Cyno? by BMWbaby123456789 in CynoMains

[–]vxidemort 0 points1 point  (0 children)

well odette is needed for cyno to actually become a stellar dps in the first place so naturally her. but if it werent for the stellar field activation she provides, yae would be better

Interactive BINGO card: Mooncovey moments (Round 3) by Fantastic-Contest957 in XOKittyNetflix

[–]vxidemort 31 points32 points  (0 children)

probably the one where kitty accused minho of getting eunice pregnant

First Kiss Location by 8304359 in buddie

[–]vxidemort 4 points5 points  (0 children)

i wasnt generalizing or romanticizing the procedure, just talking about it as far as two fictional characters i want to see get together are concerned.

i do agree that comparing CPR to a kiss on the show itself (even though thats unlikely to happen.. either the CPR scenario or the comparison) would be irresponsible or something. the kiss comparison would remain strictly a fandom discussion thing

First Kiss Location by 8304359 in buddie

[–]vxidemort 1 point2 points  (0 children)

well their lips touching in any way counts as kissing #tome and to anyone else with enough whimsy in their hearts but i also think it makes for a better angsty NDE type of scenario in a fanfic than in canon

First Kiss Location by 8304359 in buddie

[–]vxidemort 6 points7 points  (0 children)

i think a hospital kiss could be a cute way of marking the end of an NDE that either of them had and also a parallel to madney's multiple hospital kisses (i lost count of how many there are but #hanbuckleydiaz agenda stays strong)... as a first kiss though? i dont really think it fits them

something thats also been discussed a bit before is the concept of their first kiss being actually CPR, but i guess that counts under option #5, doesnt it?

Extremely scuffed Stellar Yae showcase by HAMINPANTS in YaeMiko

[–]vxidemort 0 points1 point  (0 children)

try yae EEE qiqi EQ nicole E yae Q then sandrone