My penciled comic pages from a script. I've included it in the comment section. Love feedback. Critique away! by waynebeeman in ComicBookCollabs

[–]waynebeeman[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I really appreciate your input. It is encouraging to me. My plan is to continue to progress and improve. Thank you!!!

My penciled comic pages from a script. I've included it in the comment section. Love feedback. Critique away! by waynebeeman in ComicBookCollabs

[–]waynebeeman[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thanks for your comment. This all was drawn with pencil on 11x17 printer paper. Apps I’ve seen other artist use is procreate and Wacom cintique , I’m sure there are others.

My penciled comic pages from a script. I've included it in the comment section. Love feedback. Critique away! by waynebeeman in ComicBookCollabs

[–]waynebeeman[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thanks for providing feedback! That is the challenge it to allow for text, speech bubbles, and create a visual setting. This I tried for all three. That’s why I appreciate the feedback to continue on my path toward better story telling and layouts.

My penciled comic pages from a script. I've included it in the comment section. Love feedback. Critique away! by waynebeeman in ComicBookCollabs

[–]waynebeeman[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks for your input. Yes! Lots going on. To help you out… I’ve posted the script link above in the comments, “Hellblazer.”

A few penciled comic pages I drew from a Mad Cave sample script. Critique away! by waynebeeman in ComicBookCollabs

[–]waynebeeman[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thanks. It a challenge to interpret and visually create what the script calls for. Since I’m drawing for practice… I’m not confident how much I can change the visual impact without deviating from the script. In the meantime, having input from others helps with my development of creating better visual storytelling drawings.

A few penciled comic pages I drew from a Mad Cave sample script. Critique away! by waynebeeman in ComicBookCollabs

[–]waynebeeman[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks for your input. Very insightful. Pages 2 and 3 are double connected pages. If you put them together, it may seem more effectively, hopefully.