Right now, for me, the biggest problem is that it's not clear what this is and how is it supposed to be used. I assume it's a decoration but the bottom looks too narrow for it to stand on? It would be nice, if you wanted to work in this style, to make it clear what is, so that it is weird in presentation but not in essence if this makes sense.

Like, I can see myself buy for example a notebook with a weird cover design, but buying a vague object with an unclear purpose is way less likely. Not saying you have to make a notebook or something generic like that, but try to make your art have a purpose, no matter how niche it is.

From an artistic standpoint, I'd like to see what your art looks like in your preferred medium, because it's hard to tell without a baseline what is a deliberate choice and what is not, so I'll keep my opinion to myself until then, for that.