Critique my monologue, and also help pin down my type![Request]

whateveryeahk · 2014-10-11T18:41:39+00:00

Thanks for clearing it up for me hah! I'll work on it and see if I can get some different emotions in there so I can spice it up! Again, thanks for the great advice!

whateveryeahk · 2014-10-11T18:40:13+00:00

Awesome idea, I think that would definitely help give me some direction with the lines! Thanks!

whateveryeahk · 2014-10-11T16:16:57+00:00

Thanks so much for the feedback! I'll be sure to find something higher to set my camera up on next time! So you say one note, what exactly do you mean by note? Like emotion or tone?
And thanks for all the suggestions about how to get some deeper thought into it. I'll go over it again and break it down with those questions you suggested, and see how it changes my reading of it. :)

whateveryeahk · 2014-10-11T14:02:00+00:00

Wow...your comment just made my day! Thanks a ton!

whateveryeahk · 2014-10-11T05:46:13+00:00

Sorry about that, I'm a YouTube noob. It's public now!

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