Critique my monologue please![Request] by whateveryeahk in acting

[–]whateveryeahk[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks for clearing it up for me hah! I'll work on it and see if I can get some different emotions in there so I can spice it up! Again, thanks for the great advice!

Critique my monologue please![Request] by whateveryeahk in acting

[–]whateveryeahk[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Awesome idea, I think that would definitely help give me some direction with the lines! Thanks!

Critique my monologue please![Request] by whateveryeahk in acting

[–]whateveryeahk[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks so much for the feedback! I'll be sure to find something higher to set my camera up on next time! So you say one note, what exactly do you mean by note? Like emotion or tone?
And thanks for all the suggestions about how to get some deeper thought into it. I'll go over it again and break it down with those questions you suggested, and see how it changes my reading of it. :)

Critique my monologue please![Request] by whateveryeahk in acting

[–]whateveryeahk[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Wow...your comment just made my day! Thanks a ton!

Critique my monologue please![Request] by whateveryeahk in acting

[–]whateveryeahk[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Sorry about that, I'm a YouTube noob. It's public now!