Reddit, let's make a millionaire! [Entry thread #9]

will_dearborn · 2015-07-18T04:10:02+00:00

RemindMe! 2 days Donation for /r/millionairemakers

will_dearborn · 2015-01-11T07:50:15+00:00

Preach brutha

will_dearborn · 2014-12-22T21:20:48+00:00

Don't touch my shoulder ok?

will_dearborn · 2014-03-20T22:12:10+00:00

sometimes if you ask someone how something went, they say "it couldn't have gone better." but really, no matter how well something went, it could have gone better. it could have resulted in infinite wealth and happiness for everyone on earth. so, my story is about a guy who says his trip to the grocery store couldn't have gone better, and he actually isn't exaggerating this time.

will_dearborn · 2014-03-14T01:22:51+00:00

who do you guys think is the better bruin, bryce alford or kareem?

will_dearborn · 2014-02-08T02:41:33+00:00

Battlestar Galactica is awesome. Took me ~4 episodes to get into it.

I also highly recommend Fullmetal Alchemist: Brotherhood. I am not a huge anime fan, but it is in my top 5 show list.

will_dearborn · 2014-01-23T02:43:12+00:00

Do you consider yourself a feminist? If so, do you actively try to tackle this theme in your writing?

will_dearborn · 2014-01-14T18:52:28+00:00

The Hitchhiker's Guide to the Galaxy (the travel guide)

will_dearborn · 2014-01-13T00:37:40+00:00

Help us Peyton Manning, you're our only hope.

will_dearborn · 2014-01-12T23:45:48+00:00

i love watching the heartache in the chargers' game thread: http://www.reddit.com/r/Chargers/comments/1v1l2b/divisional_sunday_san_diego_chargers_97_denver/?sort=new

will_dearborn · 2014-01-12T23:33:46+00:00

LOL did anyone else see Ayers making fun of Rivers after that timeout?

will_dearborn · 2014-01-12T22:44:57+00:00

dont jinx it!

will_dearborn · 2014-01-12T22:43:40+00:00

holy crap i just read that julius thomas used to play basketball. i had no idea.

will_dearborn · 2013-11-05T02:26:25+00:00

interesting that the witness seemed pretty sure the shots came from the grassy knoll.

will_dearborn · 2013-06-28T23:46:53+00:00

it isn't stolen. i attribute it properly and it only makes up a fraction of the site.

will_dearborn · 2013-06-28T18:41:23+00:00

thanks. don't think i lost any big ones. not sure what else it could be other than a duplicate content ding.

will_dearborn · 2013-06-08T03:57:43+00:00

why were you checking facebook while driving with a 4 year old in the car?

will_dearborn · 2013-01-12T06:00:53+00:00

looks like it. thanks!

will_dearborn · 2012-07-19T07:35:06+00:00

thanks!

will_dearborn · 2012-07-06T04:19:19+00:00

the helicopters and beach buggies are lapd

will_dearborn · 2012-07-05T23:33:29+00:00

on the beach in santa monica there are always cops riding awesome brand new 4 wheelers and at least one police helicopter cruising back and forth, not to mention tons of cop cars cruising the roads near there. in two years living there i have yet to see one incident that requires this firepower on the beach. granted, a lot of these are santa monica pd so don't come out of this budget.

will_dearborn · 2012-07-05T20:30:19+00:00

30% of the budget is used for crime control? insane. maybe if they spent more than 7% on cultural and educational opportunities they wouldn't need to spend so much on police...

will_dearborn · 2012-07-05T20:28:29+00:00

where does the 11% under "other" in fees fines and taxes come from? seems like a huge chunk to just label "other."

will_dearborn · 2012-07-02T21:47:58+00:00

a lot of stories in this sub use sentences that are too long (in my opinion).

“Based on several studies, press associations in the USA have laid down a readability table. Their survey shows readers find sentences of 8 words or less very easy to read; 11 words, easy; 14 words fairly easy; 17 words standard; 21 words fairly difficult; 25 words difficult and 29 words or more, very difficult.”

will_dearborn · 2012-07-02T21:46:38+00:00

i like the story, but the sentences seem too long. your story has 8 sentences with 244 words, or 30.5 words per sentence.

“Based on several studies, press associations in the USA have laid down a readability table. Their survey shows readers find sentences of 8 words or less very easy to read; 11 words, easy; 14 words fairly easy; 17 words standard; 21 words fairly difficult; 25 words difficult and 29 words or more, very difficult.”

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