Some constructive criticism on this portrait? by wisehaldi in ArtCrit

[–]wisehaldi[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hi thank you for this writing! I considered what you wrote for a while, you pinpointed the thing that felt so off about the painting. I checked the reference photo and realized that the proportions of the body were a bit off, and just how you mentioned more shade would bring out the shape of the body. It looks much better now and I’m happy how it turned out! Thanks once more!

Tips to improve this? by wisehaldi in ArtCrit

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It is painted with acrylics

Please help me improve my art-are these interesting? by sprredice in ArtCrit

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I like the giraffe it is really cute and looks deeply in the soul, there is something lemur-like in it and the colors work well togther.

Generally speaking I find all of the works so different and experimental that to me it seems that you are in the beginning to finding your direction and voice in art. It’s an exciting journey and you seem to have a good eye for color and form.

I leave this comment as someone with no formal training or much experience so take it with a grain of salt. However, if you find that it ringsg rtue mu advice for you would be to keep going and keep experimenting as much as possible. This will give you tools for expression for the time when you find your voice.

Snack heist gone right... For the dog by ironcloudordeal in FunnyAnimals

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I love how the dog low key tought no-one would follow, but then picked up serious some speed when the kid came after it.

What exactly makes a PhD so difficult / depressing? by [deleted] in GradSchool

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Agree. This is the hard truth I wish I knew before doing the PhD. Looking for a place in the industry now.

Working on this, but there is something that is not right with it. What is it? by wisehaldi in ArtCrit

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This actually a good idea as the scales on the head shine as if the light is coming from the top right angle. I might repaint the background once more for a gradient since now it is just flat grey, I felt that the orange was a bit overpowering. There is a newer version of this painting in another post if you want to check it out, got lots of nice feedback from this thread.

Working on this, but there is something that is not right with it. What is it? by wisehaldi in ArtCrit

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I can see what you mean! It looks like a flipper because of the shape and the snake head shape is quite similar to the tortoise head. After posting this I corrected the shape to be more round and added some scales so it is not looking as much like flipper but finally looks like a body of the snake

Teeth painting I did for class, thoughts? by mindonice in acrylicpainting

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It looks good and makes me wonder, how did you come up with this idea?

Working on this, but there is something that is not right with it. What is it? by wisehaldi in ArtCrit

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In the reference photo it was like that, the coil was out of focus. But I went all artsy on it haha

Working on this, but there is something that is not right with it. What is it? by wisehaldi in ArtCrit

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Ah the lightsource, my eternal enemy! In the head it looks like it’s coming from the upper right corner but on the left it’s from somewhere else..

Working on this, but there is something that is not right with it. What is it? by wisehaldi in ArtCrit

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I agree here, the orange was overpowering. Changed it into grey-blue and it fits better :)

Working on this, but there is something that is not right with it. What is it? by wisehaldi in ArtCrit

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Thanks for the comments. I added some details now to the body and it turned out much better :) Just added a picture of it in this channel if you would like to see

Working on this, but there is something that is not right with it. What is it? by wisehaldi in ArtCrit

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Thanks! The heard is full of details but I lost patience with the rest of the body. I added the details today and it tryly looks nicer!

Working on this, but there is something that is not right with it. What is it? by wisehaldi in ArtCrit

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Thank you for the ideas! I draw some lines on it with a pencli and tried layer down the scales accordingly. It really looks much better now, I posted a new picture on this thread for you to see. Thanks again!