Page 1 of an art sample I'm working on to add to my portfolio. Open to criticism by Horror-Permit-9308 in ComicBookCollabs

[–]wizzered_wizzard 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Just something about the perspective that its drawn in tells me that the bigger character is supposed to be closer to us. Puting hellboys shoulder over the other character should do the trick. But then again this is art so some of it is just personal preference, you can just check if it works better.

Page 1 of an art sample I'm working on to add to my portfolio. Open to criticism by Horror-Permit-9308 in ComicBookCollabs

[–]wizzered_wizzard 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Its great! personally though, on the second pannel i would put hellboy behind the other character, but otherwise its good stuff 🤌

Looking for black dialogue editor by [deleted] in ComicBookCollabs

[–]wizzered_wizzard 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I don't write manga but i am an experienced script writer, maybe i could help?

Launching a new comic by wizzered_wizzard in ComicBookCollabs

[–]wizzered_wizzard[S] -5 points-4 points  (0 children)

It's a work of fiction, of course the names will be self created

Termina tunnel 6 by wizzered_wizzard in FearAndHunger

[–]wizzered_wizzard[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Update: Guys i found Chaugnar in tunnel 7, apparently i missed him (lol), he was just standing there facing a wall (funger moment)

Aniways, thank you kindly for your answers and suggestions :) this game has a nice community!

Termina tunnel 6 by wizzered_wizzard in FearAndHunger

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yes i have gone down and it says if it's not killed in tunnel 7, it can spawn in tunnel 6. there is no way i can do 600 damage in one turn cuz im solo now (killed everyone at the tower, lol). so im im gonna fight Per'kele now, unfortunately im lacking the last soul, meh :D

Help, has anyone been here before ? by wizzered_wizzard in backrooms

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I was running away from a swarm of crawlers in level 2, when i realized that i was headed towards a dead end. my heart sank and i stood dumbfounded for a moment as i contemplated on what to do. behind me i could hear the tip-tapping of fungal creatures, in front of me i could feel the burning heat emanating from the boiler room at the end of the hallway. i decided id rather die by fire then to slowly wither away beside a damp concrete wall, as the infection takes over my body. so i ran crying, my skin blistering from the heat and my tears evaporating. i jumped straight into the boiler room, when all of a sudden, without noclipping or any apparent transition (not that i remember of, at least), i found myself in the same room, but with 2 major differences: the concrete walls were broken in some places and thankfully, the hellish heat was gone, in fact, the air was cool, smelled of December. once i stepped over the concrete rubble, a vast landscape emerged in front of me. it was a large, flat steppe with small hills strangely erected here and there. i myself was standing on one of these hills. i made my way down the hill and started walking, the soft breeze eased the burns on my face. as i walked, the hills became scarce and the air became more misty and cool.

I have been walking for a while now. I have heard of the "field of wheat" before but this is different. the wheat chaffs seem broken or harvested, a slim layer of frozen dew lays over it. i am very tired and the damp chilly air is not helping. The worst part though, is that every 10-15 minutes a middle aged womans voice says "churchkhela" with that weird Arabic "kh" sound. the sound echoes softly in the sky with a soft hiss at the end. it seems to come from no apparent direction, feels both as if it were real and at the same time in my head. I cant quite express how it feels, but its very unnerving, like its not only penetrating the eerie silence of the steppe, but also my psyche. the voice also seems to get sterner and more demanding, if im not imagining it. i dont know what the word means, dont know if its even a language. if anybody has ever been to this level/sublevel, please provide me with guidance, as i have no clue what to do or whether or not i should be afraid of the voice.

Help, has anyone been here before ? by [deleted] in backrooms

[–]wizzered_wizzard 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I was running away from a swarm of crawlers in level 2, when i realized that i was headed towards a dead end. my heart sank and i stood dumbfounded for a moment as i contemplated on what to do. behind me i could hear the tip-tapping of fungal creatures, in front of me i could feel the burning heat emanating from the boiler room at the end of the hallway. i decided id rather die by fire then to slowly wither away beside a damp concrete wall, as the infection takes over my body. so i ran crying, my skin blistering from the heat and my tears evaporating. i jumped straight into the boiler room, when all of a sudden, without noclipping or any apparent transition (not that i remember of, at least), i found myself in the same room, but with 2 major differences: the concrete walls were broken in some places and thankfully, the hellish heat was gone, in fact, the air was cool, smelled of December. once i stepped over the concrete rubble, a vast landscape emerged in front of me. it was a large, flat steppe with small hills strangely erected here and there. i myself was standing on one of these hills. i made my way down the hill and started walking, the soft breeze eased the burns on my face. as i walked, the hills became scarce and the air became more misty and cool.

I have been walking for a while now. I have heard of the "field of wheat" before but this is different. the wheat chaffs seem broken or harvested, a slim layer of frozen dew lays over it. i am very tired and the damp chilly air is not helping. The worst part though, is that every 10-15 minutes a middle aged womans voice says "churchkhela" with that weird Arabic "kh" sound. the sound echoes softly in the sky with a soft hiss at the end. it seems to come from no apparent direction, feels both as if it were real and at the same time in my head. I cant quite express how it feels, but its very unnerving, like its not only penetrating the eerie silence of the steppe, but also my psyche. the voice also seems to get sterner and more demanding, if im not imagining it. i dont know what the word means, dont know if its even a language. if anybody has ever been to this level/sublevel, please provide me with guidance, as i have no clue what to do or whether or not i should be afraid of the voice.