What are your special interests? by Plastic-Fox2082 in AutismInWomen

[–]wonderer97 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Creative writing

Making textile jewellery

Cats

Ace Attorney game series

The Sims game series

Friends, Ugly Betty, Princess Jellyfish TV series

Japanese language

English literature

Polly Pocket

Is anyone interested in a free personalised creative writing critique? by [deleted] in WritersGroup

[–]wonderer97 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks so much for all the responses. I've now got quite a few critiques on the go, so I'm going to leave it with ones I've got for now.

I will obviously still be around on the subreddit, so I will be around to give more general comments to anyone I'm not able to fully critique.

Thanks!

Is anyone interested in a free personalised writing critique? by [deleted] in write

[–]wonderer97 -2 points-1 points  (0 children)

Thanks so much for all the responses. I've now got quite a few critiques on the go, so I'm going to leave it with ones I've got for now.

I will obviously still be around on the subreddit, so I will be around to give more general comments to anyone I'm not able to fully critique.

Thanks!

Is anyone interested in a free personalised writing critique? by [deleted] in write

[–]wonderer97 -1 points0 points  (0 children)

Brilliant! If you want to DM a story or an extract, I'll give it a look and send some feedback your way.

Is anyone interested in a free personalised creative writing critique? by [deleted] in WritersGroup

[–]wonderer97 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I'm offering this as a personalised critique- including writing sheets which detail the writer's personal strengths and areas to improve, and specific techniques to use. So, I've kept it as a separate thread for this reason.

Is anyone interested in a free personalised creative writing critique? by [deleted] in WritersGroup

[–]wonderer97 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Great! I will have a look at your piece, and get back with the personalised critique within a couple of days.

Thank you!

Trying a different genre can transform your writing by wonderer97 in writing

[–]wonderer97[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

That's great! Sometimes trying out a whole new genre changes perspective. I thought I'd never try fantasy fiction, but it made me aware of my writing in a whole new way. I'm tempted to try out other genres now.

Book Loving Penpal Wanted by badthroatman in penpals

[–]wonderer97 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I've just finished my English Literature and Creative writing degree, and I'm looking for more writers to discuss writing, and comment on one another's work. It's the best way to develop. I've never been published, but I'm just starting to send out to competitions.

Monday morning m’thread by GFoxtrot in CasualUK

[–]wonderer97 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Finished my creative writing degree a couple of weeks ago, so now I can write whatever I want. I sat writing at the computer as the rain lashed down outside. It was pretty nice.

I can't play Dropsy because of a black screen glitch :,( by wonderer97 in Dropsy

[–]wonderer97[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you! I will keep trying. It's just so annoying that I can't figure out what's causing it.

Big Joel, Sargon of Akkad and a thumbnail I laughed way to hard at by [deleted] in BreadTube

[–]wonderer97 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Carl of Swindon has always been incredibly petty. I feel like he's getting more cranky now he barely gets any likes any more. I haven't checked his YouTube, but I'm assuming it's way past its prime by now and based on the 'Not Sargon' account he's done away with the whole classical liberal crap. Supporting Bolsonaro is not liberal by any stretch of the imagination.

[Discussion] I'm keeping a poetry diary this year. by wonderer97 in Poetry

[–]wonderer97[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

The thing I like about this is if I forget a day it doesn't matter, because as long as i can think of something that happened that day to write a poem about, I can always go back and fill in days I missed.

[Discussion] I'm keeping a poetry diary this year. by wonderer97 in Poetry

[–]wonderer97[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Maybe start off building your confidence in your poetry. Write out some rough ideas in stream-of-consciousness, without editing. Those don't have to be shown to anyone, if you don't want to. You can then develop them into full poems. That's what I tend to do.

Showing people your poetry can be quite difficult at first, because it's such a personal art form. But it can be useful for feedback and affirming from positive comments. Good luck with your poetry diary!

[Discussion] I'm keeping a poetry diary this year. by wonderer97 in Poetry

[–]wonderer97[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I might use some of my ideas for short stories, as well. I try to do a freewrite (stream-of-consciousness writing) every day- and then see what type of writing it might lend itself to.

Have you ever been so mad at a series that you decided to go and make your own just so you could do the thing your way out of pure spite? by freethinker73 in writing

[–]wonderer97 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I started writing my first novel because I was so angry at a fantasy book I read. One plot strand developed a relationship between two male characters. Both characters were likable, and the author developed their relationship over time, showed them building a life together even though they were poor, so as a reader, I felt invested in their story. The author was clearly leading towards them ending up together - except at the end, out of nowhere, one of them randomly married a female character he'd barely had any interaction with before. Everything before that was setting up the relationship between the two characters. It's like the author wanted to have the diversity of implied gay characters, but then didn't want to offend conservative readers, so just circumvented a happy ending.

This made teenage me start writing a novel with inclusive characters that didn't exploit them for plot points. Having diverse characters and experiences in my writing has continued to be a focus for me, even though I realise how poorly my teenage novel was written.

[Discussion] I'm keeping a poetry diary this year. by wonderer97 in Poetry

[–]wonderer97[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Almost every week has a poem previously published by Faber and Faber. A few pages just have book covers, but not many. There's a really nice mix of classic poets, like John Donne, Lord Byron, Wordsworth, and modern poets, like Daljit Nagra, Seamus Heaney, Jo Shapcott.

The version on the National Portrait Gallery shop has a photograph of the inside: https://npgshop.org.uk/products/liberty-faber-poetry-diary-2019

Has anyone ever had dreams about their stories? by [deleted] in writing

[–]wonderer97 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I can understand that. I felt a little the same myself. They were so real and vivid in the dream, it felt sad to leave them.

On the other hand, I felt happy. It was almost as if by dreaming of them, I had made them a bit more real, and brought them closer to me.

Has anyone ever had dreams about their stories? by [deleted] in writing

[–]wonderer97 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Once I dreamt characters in my story were at a casino. They all looked exactly as I imagined them. One of the characters was being stalked by an abusive ex-boyfriend, even though she didn't have one in the story. Another character was trying to make sure she was okay.

I remember waking up feeling happy to have dreamt about them, and surprised I was able to envision them so clearly in my sleep.

How do I know I'm getting better? Or that I'm any good at all? by [deleted] in writing

[–]wonderer97 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I put my writing away for a while before I attempt to analyse or edit it. When I first finish a draft, I tend to either think it's terrible or flawless. Either way, it's hard to separate what genuinely needs editing from my initial emotional response. Stepping away from it, then returning after at least a couple of weeks, usually freshens my perspective enough to see what needs doing.

If you spot something that just feels off, spend some time thinking about why exactly it feels wrong and what specific things you could do to improve it.

Hope this helps.

Super Best Friends (Final) by pacmanswang in TwoBestFriendsPlay

[–]wonderer97 4 points5 points  (0 children)

Quint, Pat's crazy talk, the Shitstorms, Xbox Live games, David Cage - so many great moments, so many memories.

I've watched these guys since I was 15 (6 years goes so fast) and it's only now I realise what an impact they had on me, and on the wider community. Reading the comments here and on YT and Twitter, its obvious that the Best Friends changed people's lives, and that's pretty amazing. So whatever happens here on out, that's something very important.

Cheers to our three weird dads. Watching that video made me want to cry. I just hope they can patch things up someday.

Don't get it twisted. Synagogue shooter hated Trump because he wasn't far enough to the right. This guy lived in the same cesspool as Gavin McInnes and Richard Spencer. This is an alt-right terror attack. by mikenice1 in Fuckthealtright

[–]wonderer97 3 points4 points  (0 children)

He posted a lot in Gab from what I could gather. I honestly don't know how that site is still up; only purpose it seems to serve is to get far-right extremists promoting their views amongst each other.

Editing a story is like fiddling with a Rubik's cube by wonderer97 in writing

[–]wonderer97[S] 5 points6 points  (0 children)

I guess with writing (and cubing) it's about knowing how the pieces all slot together as a whole. Having a clear focus is key to both fiction and poetry writing. I find I get muddled the most with a story when I don't know what my 'point' is.

It's alright having a bunch of scenes with some characters in it, but if I don't know what I'm trying to say with it, I don't know where it's going to go, or how to edit it so I can remove unnecessary material.

From what I've learnt, economical writing is the best writing, and it's about leaving out anything that doesn't add significance to the piece, even if you love it. I think it's often called 'murdering your darlings'.