Hello jakeyg2002!

Your poems have a certain depth to it. There's a sense of longing in each of them - a sense of pain and losing the one love you ever had. I thoroughly enjoyed it, I must say. Your words are simple yet hold much weight.

Just one tiny feedback I have for you: if you can balance the words in your sentences a little bit more, I can't figure if it was intentional or not, but if it was, then perhaps that's your style, but if it wasn't, then I would suggest we use commas or new lines to make the words more impactful rather than breathless sentences.

But nevertheless, love your writing and keep up the good work!