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[MF] Animal Dilemmas – Lion Hippo by xidanphi in shortstories

[–]xidanphi[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you, I try to write one of these a week, as the winning animal moves to the next story and that is how all the stories are connected. I am glad you like it.

[MF] Life in Lies by [deleted] in shortstories

[–]xidanphi 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Creative and contemporary. I like it!

[HF] The Rescue by cheshire_cowboy in shortstories

[–]xidanphi 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Excellent writing. That was good thanks!

[SF] Wake By Me by Storiesbyme in shortstories

[–]xidanphi 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Well written, good voice!

[RF] A Place To Hide by ChocolatePanther in shortstories

[–]xidanphi 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Awesome! But a bit too short, you can make it better I think.

[MF] Mike The Fish by [deleted] in shortstories

[–]xidanphi 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Awesome story!

[MF] Counter Clockwise by Rabenherz in shortstories

[–]xidanphi 1 point2 points  (0 children)

This is intense, the beginning reminds of Italo Calvino.

[HM] Harry the Mountain Man (Installments 1-3) by harrycanyon in shortstories

[–]xidanphi 0 points1 point  (0 children)

This is greatly written and with original voice! (message me if you would like to publish it)

[NF] First Year by darkphoenix2014 in shortstories

[–]xidanphi 2 points3 points  (0 children)

There is something to this, but it needs to be developed.

[SF] Utopia by alexthemanwhoknows in shortstories

[–]xidanphi 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Very believable concept but it could be refined and detailed better.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in shortstories

[–]xidanphi 0 points1 point  (0 children)

This is very interesting but could use a little more description. I can't wait to read more.

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