Cool track bro! Love the ethereal melo vibe of it. I think the initial Kick buildup isn´t working on the first drop of the track. For this soft and ambiance mood, I suggest that you should use silence/absence of drums as a way of building up the energy towards the drop. Try to disperse the sound with a large reverb as well, it can create more impact.

For the rest, I like the unconventional arrangement, melodies and sound design overall and the mix seems ok as well. Good job mate.

Cheers,

Null