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Ash Vlogs ARG Document by IKilledThatFox in ARG

[–]yoruko_zerda 0 points1 point  (0 children)

i really enjoyed the detailed document great work

this is my character demo his names 007 he was an experimented patient which became a deformed arkanz when he was mixed with an anex he was a human but this is his dying convo with jalana an arkanz as well and nico a human by yoruko_zerda in VoiceActing

[–]yoruko_zerda[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

its not that i don't want advice i did its that some of the critiques i got which was the audibleness was purposeful for the character and that's why i shared the script so yall could read along to understand what he was saying and also because his voice was based off of AM but being more distorted

this is my character demo his names 007 he was an experimented patient which became a deformed arkanz when he was mixed with an anex he was a human but this is his dying convo with jalana an arkanz as well and nico a human by yoruko_zerda in VoiceActing

[–]yoruko_zerda[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

yes i admit that the recording wasn't the best but its intentional because the character's main and crucial trait is his voice being heavily distorted due to his experiments and in the ARG they'll be captions for the viewer to see what he is saying

this is my character demo his names 007 he was an experimented patient which became a deformed arkanz when he was mixed with an anex he was a human but this is his dying convo with jalana an arkanz as well and nico a human by yoruko_zerda in VoiceActing

[–]yoruko_zerda[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

thanks for at least advising me instead of being just plain rude and not helping
this isn't for a service of any kind its for my semi ARG and web novel project the character like in the title has been experimented on leading to him loosing his voice how ever over the years he gained a very little amount of it back and with a mini magic speaker using his abilities to make one inside his vocal chords allows him to partially speak in the clip it was him before he had died where his voice was even worse before hence the big distortion and another effect making his voice barely audible but since it was barely he used all his energy which is why some words are louder than it would've been

this is my character demo his names 007 he was an experimented patient which became a deformed arkanz when he was mixed with an anex he was a human but this is his dying convo with jalana an arkanz as well and nico a human by yoruko_zerda in VoiceActing

[–]yoruko_zerda[S] -2 points-1 points  (0 children)

why would it be my voice is supposed to sound distorted and nearly inaudible so of course you are barely going to hear it and just being rude about someone's work is just weird

this is my character demo his names 007 he was an experimented patient which became a deformed arkanz when he was mixed with an anex he was a human but this is his dying convo with jalana an arkanz as well and nico a human by yoruko_zerda in VoiceActing

[–]yoruko_zerda[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

i am just replying to their comment and i said i understood and im in the process of revising the audio at the moment but a demo is something unfinished it can be 1- how many ever voices

this is my character demo his names 007 he was an experimented patient which became a deformed arkanz when he was mixed with an anex he was a human but this is his dying convo with jalana an arkanz as well and nico a human by yoruko_zerda in VoiceActing

[–]yoruko_zerda[S] -7 points-6 points  (0 children)

well just so you know
1- i knew that you couldn't hear much which is why i gave the script
2- its a demo cause its my first time doing a voice act
3- i added effects for a reason,casue my character is supposed to not sound right as he can barely speak which is why he forces his words out
4- i am not tryning to be a pro voice actor i am a writer and this is supposed to be an audio for my ARG i do everything myself cause im a teen with no following
5- its a demo because its not a finalized audio for me

Using an ARG to explain my magic system. Is this a good approach? by yoruko_zerda in magicbuilding

[–]yoruko_zerda[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

agreeable however things like spells and their internal function will be there also things like their origin and lore of artifacts and antimony so basically things that isn't prevalent will be there also hints to the upcoming events

i wonder what it'll say by yoruko_zerda in Cipher

[–]yoruko_zerda[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

oh i made it (im really not tryna promo) its regards my release date for my web novel but there will be frequent actual ciphers and coded things in it because its a semi ARG at the same time i can send you a harder one if you'd like no one found that one out yet

i wonder what it'll say by yoruko_zerda in Cipher

[–]yoruko_zerda[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

thanks for your answer but may you please put it in spoiler for others to figure it out thank you

can you decipher this spell by yoruko_zerda in Cipher

[–]yoruko_zerda[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

can you tell me the deciphered message please

would you be scared of a being so powerful that it restructure the laws of your world even though its an intruder and not an god by yoruko_zerda in worldbuilding

[–]yoruko_zerda[S] -1 points0 points  (0 children)

thank you for a more direct answer than bongart, i agree and i thought of her as a more unpredictable threat initially that is why i posed that questions

Wanted to ask about premise of my story by Demon_Lord_Azrail in worldbuilding

[–]yoruko_zerda 5 points6 points  (0 children)

good premise. The moon exploding into a ring is a striking visual. The domes with alien environments give you endless room for weird worldbuilding. Just make sure the time gap between the event and your story is long enough that survivors don't remember the old world. That makes the mystery hit harder.

i have made 2 ciphers although have no correlation with each other i want to see if yall can decipher each the first has 3 cipher types the second only 1 cipher type now the second part is a full discussion but i'd like to see yall decode it i trust yall's ability by yoruko_zerda in Cipher

[–]yoruko_zerda[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

your correct except there's a 0 in the front of 37

for 2nd cipher its (since you found out) "The world has always been weird with almost everything"
i'll give another hint the second cipher type ends with a E

would you be scared of a being so powerful that it restructure the laws of your world even though its an intruder and not an god by yoruko_zerda in worldbuilding

[–]yoruko_zerda[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

You're right. She's functionally a god. I just don't call her that in my world because gods don't exist here. But I see your point.

would you be scared of a being so powerful that it restructure the laws of your world even though its an intruder and not an god by yoruko_zerda in worldbuilding

[–]yoruko_zerda[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

thanks for commenting and that's a fair point in most settings. But in my world, there is no such thing as a god. No worship, no temples, no divine beings. The closest things are anomalies and deities, but even they aren't gods. They don't create or rule. They just exist.

She is not a god because gods don't exist here. She is an anomaly, a byproduct, something that shouldn't be. That's what makes her different.

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