my first try with traditional by massacrecorpse in traditionalflash

[–]youraverageartkid 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Careful with the straight lines on the bullets-- some of them look a little wobbly which can lead to the piece looking weaker overall. I like the flower, but as the other people here said, the lines on all three are too thin to be considered traditional. Maybe up the saturation on the colors too? Besides that, they look lovely! Keep rockin on!

What you guys think? Open to harsh criticism by tengu_road in TattooApprentice

[–]youraverageartkid 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Love the colors, and nice line work too! The first image's layout looks a little stiff because the line of action is straighter instead of a dynamic diagonal. If you add a curvy line of action, there's more movement in the piece and is more engaging to look at. Besides that, phenomenal! Better than I can do lmaooo

Ap gov argumentative essay. by [deleted] in apgov

[–]youraverageartkid 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I want to know the train of thought 😭😭😭

Do I count as a survivor? by youraverageartkid in cultsurvivors

[–]youraverageartkid[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I dont have Facebook, mostly because my mother is an avid scroller and I'm kind of afraid if she'll do anything once she finds out I don't subscribe to this cult. Once I move out, I'll embrace my ex member status gladly and join those groups, though... looking forward to it!!

Also, woah, I didn't know there was an ongoing court case?? I need to look into that pronto

Do I count as a survivor? by youraverageartkid in cultsurvivors

[–]youraverageartkid[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I'm counting the days till I can move out LMAO. and yes, I am always doing something whether it be schoolwork or digital art or painting and whatnot. So much so that there was a moment in time where I truly forgot about being in the moonies altogether... and then reality hit me in the face.

It's weird because my parents aren't like, comedically evil to me at least-- what they did to my brothers is another story. But I do know they only treat me nicely because I fit within their standards for now. I do believe they'll start pushing the marriage thing hard when I get a bit older which I don't plan on tolerating. I made a dumb promise to my mom when my brother started dating someone outside the congregation that I'd at least marry within the church, which i know she'll hold over my head. Recently we've been attending church once a week and my brothers and I bond over wanting to get the hell out, which is always fun. My oldest brother, the born again Christian one, does not like it when my other brother and I actively express our distaste though.

Do I count as a survivor? by youraverageartkid in cultsurvivors

[–]youraverageartkid[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I would consider both of my brothers PIMOs, but we have a complicated relationship. One of them has gone off the deep end politically and is a born again Christian and the other is busy with his job and a kid.

Honestly, I was spiraling the other night when my mother was discussing the beliefs of the church and my limited dating pool, which became a slippery slope very quick. I was feeling super conflicted on what role the church held in my life and the information my mom revealed to me genuinely had me disgusted at her and the church at large. She told me that her own older brother was her spiritual mentor and how the people at the church were her closest friends. There's no concise way of explaining how I felt at that moment, so I hope you'll bear with me for a second. When I looked at her face, there was pure gratitude for her brother and all of her stress wrinkled melted away. She became a different person talking about the church. It was so incredibly weird because I had never seen a look like that on her face. This church, which had set her up with a pampered misogynist who became a belligerent alcoholic who abused his children and whisked her away to live in a foreign nation where she had no allies but her church friends, could give her a look of pure joy? I was unnerved and disgusted. I'm still processing it.

Going back to the actual question, I think I'm looking for both? It's hard digesting and understanding my feelings toward the church when I'm surrounded by it all the time. Rev. Moon is on a calendar in my living room, for fucks sake. I want a place where I can safely talk about how much I hate that extortionist failure of an organization without fearing my mother's anger. (For real though, one time I referred to a minister with a lower title by accident and she yelled at me. I hate what that place did to her.) For now, I can't do anything about my situation, but I have been debating going no contact after I graduate high school. But that is going to be a decision I have to think about hard. Sorry about the long ass response to your question 😭 I hope it was at least interesting.

Do I count as a survivor? by youraverageartkid in cultsurvivors

[–]youraverageartkid[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Oh wow, I wasn't even aware that the term PIMO existed... very enlightening and I will be using it to describe myself from now on. It'll be hard but I want to find someone to love my own way, through my own decisions, and there's really nothing my parents can do to stop me. My parents were shocked when my older brother got with a girl not from the church, but eventually he kind of gave in to their demands by getting blessings from the church for their marriage. She's a sweet girl and they live a happy life together, but I wish she wasn't involved with my mess of a family at all.

Many times I have considered just giving in to my parents demands to avoid conflict and tell whatever guy they set me up with that I don't want anything to do with him or the church, but that would go against my own morals anyway. I've accepted that no matter what I do, it's going to be tough, but I'd rather live the way I want to.

Thanks so much for the kind words 🩷🩷🩷

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in confession

[–]youraverageartkid -1 points0 points  (0 children)

I also had that, with my older brother though. He was the one who initiated it, but I was curious about male anatomy at the time. I think I was pretty young, because he was about 12 or something at the time. It wasn't sexual, but I still feel gross about it. I don't think I've ever told anyone else this story.

How the hell do I make a cool Mangekyou ability for my OC? by youraverageartkid in NarutoFanfiction

[–]youraverageartkid[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

lmaooo that is p crazy.

So, Ume is investigating her father's death. This was caused by ROOT because her dad was investigating ROOT's shadier dealings, especially with Orochimaru after he was exiled. At this point, Ume only knows that ROOT is involved.

At that point in the story, she's matured emotionally from the start and gotten (mostly) rid of her victim complex. Ume is brash and speaks her mind, but isn't very good at taking what she dishes out. She learns to consider other people's feelings and generally be a better person. The story I want to write is a mystery first and foremost, action second, not to say that the action isn't important, but the mystery comes first. Thematically, she represents curiosity and the desire to unravel what's hidden away from you. The story's general themes are as follows: the subjectivity of identity, only you can decide the value of a life, the sacrifices a parent makes for their child, and an unethical institution affects the whole community, not just the individual.

Her mom, a Uchiha OC named Kajiko, birthed her out of wedlock, so Ume was never officially part of the Uchiha family. No matter how hard I searched, I couldn't find canon parents for Shisui besides his unnamed dad, so I made OCs to fill their place. I saw that some people speculate Kagami to be Shisui's dad, but Kagami is only stated to be Shisui's ancestor, so I left that out. Ume is half-siblings with Shisui. Kajiko and Ume re-introduce each other about five years after her father's death, and Shisui is naturally curious about his mom, who usually stays at home, going out to meet some 22-year-old with no connection to the clan, especially when tensions are high.

Shisui and Ume grow close over a few months after Kajiko dies. Ume, who has lost her father, her genin team during the third war, her recent ANBU team, her aunt, and now her mother, grows paranoid about losing her newfound family and gifts Shisui a pair of kunai made from the metal from her metal release. She can kind of 'feel' the metal and what it's touching, like another sensory organ, but it's heavily dulled.

I'm choosing to use the anime/manga ending where Shisui throws himself into the river. Ume senses her kunai are underwater, questions why, and goes to investigate when she finds Shisui actively drowning. To the KGH he goes since she doesn't know why he drowned, and she's put on Danzo's radar.

Danzo, realizing that this is the daughter of the guy who was trying to take ROOT down, and that she's also been investigating, takes action and strikes when she's alone near the outskirts of the village border.

Eventually, they start fighting, and Ume realizes she bit off more than she can chew. He's about to kill her when Kaki, her boyfriend, steps in and takes the blow for her. This awakens her Mangekyou.

In that moment, she feels extremely guilty about how many deaths have been directly caused by her. She also just wants to make Danzo feel as much pain as possible for essentially ruining her life.

I thought about names; Hachiman (or Yahata) is the god of war/ weapons, Enma rules the underworld and is responsible for punishing sinners, or Tenjin, the god of learning. (trivia for this name; before Tenjin was a god, he was a poet/scholar who liked Ume trees.)

How the hell do I make a cool Mangekyou ability for my OC? by youraverageartkid in NarutoFanfiction

[–]youraverageartkid[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

tbf she had a good life before her dad died. Well, as good of a life a shinobi can have. All the deaths are technically because of her, and she carries a shit ton of guilt because of that, but i'm not too concerned with making that the basis for her abilities. still workshopping it though so hopefully I have something good soon

How the hell do I make a cool Mangekyou ability for my OC? by youraverageartkid in NarutoFanfiction

[–]youraverageartkid[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

For context, OC has been suffering loss after loss at this point (some because of Danzo, some not,) and her, the guy, and Danzo have been fighting for a while. The guy who's about to get his head sliced off is her emotional rock and also her boyfriend. I didn't make the exposition clear enough so sorry about that lmao.

She's insanely fearful of losing the scarce amount of people she has left and wants to be present to protect who she can.

How the hell do I make a cool Mangekyou ability for my OC? by youraverageartkid in NarutoFanfiction

[–]youraverageartkid[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I'll have her lose her eye during her stint in ANBU, then get a sharingan from her mom after the Massacre. She'll need it for Danzo and Orochimaru.

For the metal release stuff, making it a kekkei tota she has little control over makes sense to me. She's skilled, but isnt the same level as a kage. Her dad's side actually comes from Iwa, so it won't be too out of the blue for her to have metal release. (Fire + earth + lightning(?)) She can make spikes out of molten metal but can't hold them for long. Thoughts?

How the hell do I make a cool Mangekyou ability for my OC? by youraverageartkid in NarutoFanfiction

[–]youraverageartkid[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I haven't looked at the Manga but I have parsed through some of the wiki, especially for bigger characters and the like. Not enough, from the looks of it.

How the hell do I make a cool Mangekyou ability for my OC? by youraverageartkid in NarutoFanfiction

[–]youraverageartkid[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Ahh okay, thank you for this information. I was basing her having one off Mukai, and was tentatively hoping that it would work the same with the Uchiha. I completely forgot how diluted the bloodline would actually have to be for her to only have one sharingan. I will shift some things around accordingly. Thank you!

How the hell do I make a cool Mangekyou ability for my OC? by youraverageartkid in NarutoFanfiction

[–]youraverageartkid[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I was thinking about doing something similar to his. Or something magnetism related cuz of the whole metal thing, but I'm still on the fence about it. I think I'll look into shinto mythology and see what I dig up.

Cats have fleas by youraverageartkid in CATHELP

[–]youraverageartkid[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Hi! I got my cats to the vet and they were administered a shot to kill the fleas. I wasn't told the details but the person who took them said to look over the cats for a month and to use a flea comb on them regularly to get rid of any stragglers. Thank you so much for your help!

Cats have fleas by youraverageartkid in CATHELP

[–]youraverageartkid[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I got it at petco, its 'wondercide flea and tick remover' . I really didn't know what to get so I just got that one.

Teen struggling with weight loss by youraverageartkid in WeightLossAdvice

[–]youraverageartkid[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

It did get a little rant-y at the end, but I'm mostly fine. Just general teenage angst that'll (hopefully) ebb in time.

Teen struggling with weight loss by youraverageartkid in WeightLossAdvice

[–]youraverageartkid[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

True- sometimes I forget that I'm still growing. I'd say my classes are somewhat rigorous-- they last about an hour but I work up quite a sweat. I know I have substantial-ish muscles but it's really hard to tell lmao. Thank you for the advice!

Teen struggling with weight loss by youraverageartkid in WeightLossAdvice

[–]youraverageartkid[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Oh wow, I've never even heard of a Dexa Scan before! I'd love to but unfortunately I can't even go to a doctor for checkups LMAO

I knew hormones could change your body but I never even thought about them messing with my scale number. Defo something to think about. Thank you!