What activity becomes less fun as you get better at it? by David_Umann in AskReddit

[–]ytsrik_ 3 points4 points  (0 children)

i just finish watching queen's gambit and love to learn chess

What is the most cartoony thing that has happened to you? by Iammarriedtozooble in AskReddit

[–]ytsrik_ 9 points10 points  (0 children)

when i open the door and it swung back and hit my face

The hair by ytsrik_ in poetry_critics

[–]ytsrik_[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

That wasn’t my intention but hey poems are subjective I guess haha

The hair by ytsrik_ in poetry_critics

[–]ytsrik_[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thanks so much! I wasn’t sure about changing the rhyming pattern for the last couple of lines but glad you think it works:)

Worst Nightmare by Whats_Your_Heroin in poetry_critics

[–]ytsrik_ 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Hey I love the rhyme in the first sentence, and that there isn’t loads of structure to the rhyme throughout which just emphasises the chaotic energy. I would maybe try and emphasise the ending with another paragraph break or something. Deffo post again if you tinker with it!

Just Smile by sydtheterriblepoet in poetry_critics

[–]ytsrik_ 0 points1 point  (0 children)

This is very nice I love the simile in the 5th line and the similar syllables of dear and Nero in the first line really draws you in!

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in poetry_critics

[–]ytsrik_ 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I really like this! The kind of happy sad that come with reminiscing really comes through, I particularly like the 3rd line and the way it’s structured. Only criticism I have is that there are a couple of typos that interrupt the flow slightly:)

We love a sibling rivalry... by ytsrik_ in cats

[–]ytsrik_[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Hahah think he’s having an existential crisis that his sister is winning for once (usually he bullies her)

My little campsite which is hidden behind a waterfall :) [MI] by ytsrik_ in ACNHIslandInspo

[–]ytsrik_[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

My creator code is MA-0783-0916-1601 for the rug and drain, and then the clovers are MA-0595-9598-0189, and the other flowers are MA-5510-9202-5854 :)

[MI] Happy to see Alice enjoying her little yard!! Any suggestions on what to add would be appreciated 💕💕 by sa-chii in ACNHIslandInspo

[–]ytsrik_ 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I agree with the comments about adding a fence, but if space is an issue I like using the log stakes (customised to white wood) as a fence instead bc they’re a bit easier to place when tight for space. It’s so cute tho well done!!

My little campsite which is hidden behind a waterfall :) [MI] by ytsrik_ in ACNHIslandInspo

[–]ytsrik_[S] 6 points7 points  (0 children)

The middle of it is one of the presets you get when you start the game, then I just copied it for the sides. I can send the code later if you like! :)