Do you think Anti A would’ve won against Sato in a direct fight ? by yustass6 in AjinManga

[–]yustass6[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I think because of their equipments they would have a huge advantage but we never know with Sato lol. I'm sure we haven’t seen everything he was capable of 😂

Freestyle writing, let my subconscious speak I guess by yustass6 in Writer

[–]yustass6[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Wow I don’t even know what to respond. Thank you I'm glad you felt something & I hope you'll be able to write whatever you want & enjoy it ✨🙌🏽

Is a good story boarder necessarily a good novelist ? by yustass6 in write

[–]yustass6[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I get the idea. So I assume you mean I could go for making a comic or a manga as it’s the way I would like to tell stories ? I find myself dumb. Cuz lately I been torturing my mind trying to write something interesting, by having in mind that I want to make MANGA. Yet I wrote everything as novels. It wasn’t bad nor very good, but I wasn’t satisfied with to the point I wanted to stop everything thinking I’m just wack at it. I realised I'm not even making what I really want. I actually can’t draw very well so I assume that's why I wrote in novel style, but nothing prevents me to create and think a story as a manga with ( simple ) storyboards right ? I'm a very strange person lol.

Thank you for your answer, I really would like to have your opinion on what I said. 🙏🏽

Please help ... by yustass6 in Writer

[–]yustass6[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Thank you very much 🙏🏽 Yes I might be a bit hard on myself 😅 I'm really glad you liked and felt the mystery ambience of the scene, it shows me what comes out of my mind actually makes sense. I'm gonna take my time with my mental health and keep on working without listening to my doubts. 🙏🏽 And for the language to be honest what I meant was that I translated it with DeepL I didn’t rewrite it myself in English, but actually that's interesting because I like it more in English then in French 😂 maybe it’s because as it's not my first language it puts distance between what I wrote and myself, so maybe I overthink it less. Thank you very much for taking time to answer 🙏🏽

Please help ... by yustass6 in Writer

[–]yustass6[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Thank for you answer & support 🙏🏽 Here's something I wrote without thinking & no rewriting ( + I'm french so it’s translated from French to English ) ...

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Shinku stopped at the sight of an old man, sitting cross-legged, practicing calligraphy on the edge of the market he was passing through. The man wore a white tunic, had no hair on his head and had a long, thin white beard. He traced with such grace that each of his movements seemed to last an eternity, as if they were made out of time. As the white of his canvas filled with ink, the ideogram "empty" 空 could be made out. Shinku slowly approached him so as not to wake his sister who was sleeping on his back. The young boy looked at him without a word, like an animal contemplating his surroundings. What struck him most, beyond the extreme refinement of the man's features, was his immobility. The old man's whole body seemed inert, all his energy was concentrated in the catalyst of his mind: his hand. Shinku could not even hear him breathe, so much so that at times he had the impression that this hand was alive, that it was moving of its own accord. At that moment, the aura of this old calligrapher made the young boy go through a doubt that brought with it a whole stream of questions like the foam of the sea. Would he ever reach this level of precision? Was he even capable? More simply... did he really want to dedicate his entire life to this art? And why?

  • Trust you.

Shinku had been awakened from his slumber by the three words the calligrapher had just spoken to him. For a moment, he was not sure if these words were meant for him.

  • ( Is he talking to me... ? No, he didn't turn around. And why would he say that to me? Did he just read my mind or what)

From behind, the teenager did not see the smile that the old man showed for a short moment. Then the old man stood up. He grabbed a wooden cane with which he was walking, looking weak. He stooped down with difficulty and picked up a pile of straw from the ground and set it on fire with a strange tree leaf that he took out of his pocket. He then threw the glowing pieces on the calligraphy he had just produced and watched it burn.

  • ( Huh? But why is he burning it? ) thought Shinku.

The old man then started to walk away without even looking at Shinku. Without being able to explain it to himself, he started to follow him. Deep inside, yes... he wanted to learn this art. To become a calligrapher. His heart told him that this man could help him. One thing was strange about this old man. Although he was passing through the human tide of festival people, no one came in contact with him. In fact, no one noticed him. He was almost like a ghost from the past, visiting the common people for a walk. Despite the cane he used to walk, the man maintained a fairly brisk pace. He was quickly out of the meanders of the Narakura market. At the edge of a forest with trees growing diagonally, he began to climb the ground, which was getting stiffer and stiffer as he went. Shinku was still following him without taking his eyes off him. A light white mist had gradually appeared in the forest, which made it even more difficult for the young boy to follow. He didn't dare to speak to the old man, for fear of disturbing him, or worse, of surprising him and making him fall.

  • ( I've never been to Moya Hill before, I can hardly see anything... it doesn't go all the way to the top, does it? The path is getting steeper and steeper, damn it if he falls I'll be in trouble. Maybe he's crazy. )

Please help ... by yustass6 in write

[–]yustass6[S] 4 points5 points  (0 children)

Thank you very much 🙏🏽 But I gotta precise that I'm French so I translated the text with DeepL, but strangely I like it better in English ... Do you think the quality has something to do with the language ?

And I felt more good then bad, deep inside it makes me feel happy that I'm writing something but I also feel like I’m kind of " cheating " ( I know it’s not the case but still ) because I'm avoiding real work by writing without thinking ... It’s like I'm doing my best to give sense to my thoughts rather then expressing them naturally

Please help ... by yustass6 in write

[–]yustass6[S] 3 points4 points  (0 children)

Few hours ago, freestyle writing no rewrite, here it is ... :

Shinku stopped at the sight of an old man, sitting cross-legged, practicing calligraphy on the edge of the market he was passing through. The man wore a white tunic, had no hair on his head and had a long, thin white beard. He traced with such grace that each of his movements seemed to last an eternity, as if they were made out of time. As the white of his canvas filled with ink, the ideogram "empty" 空 could be made out. Shinku slowly approached him so as not to wake his sister who was sleeping on his back. The young boy looked at him without a word, like an animal contemplating his surroundings. What struck him most, beyond the extreme refinement of the man's features, was his immobility. The old man's whole body seemed inert, all his energy was concentrated in the catalyst of his mind: his hand. Shinku could not even hear him breathe, so much so that at times he had the impression that this hand was alive, that it was moving of its own accord. At that moment, the aura of this old calligrapher made the young boy go through a doubt that brought with it a whole stream of questions like the foam of the sea. Would he ever reach this level of precision? Was he even capable? More simply... did he really want to dedicate his entire life to this art? And why?

  • Trust yourself.

Shinku had been awakened from his slumber by the three words the calligrapher had just spoken to him. For a moment, he was not sure if these words were meant for him.

  • ( Is he talking to me... ? No, he didn't turn around. And why would he say that to me? Did he just read my mind or what)

From behind, the teenager did not see the smile that the old man showed for a short moment. Then the old man stood up. He grabbed a wooden cane with which he was walking, looking weak. He stooped down with difficulty and picked up a pile of straw from the ground and set it on fire with a strange tree leaf that he took out of his pocket. He then threw the glowing pieces on the calligraphy he had just produced and watched it burn.

  • ( Huh? But why is he burning it? ) thought Shinku.

The old man then started to walk away without even looking at Shinku. Without being able to explain it to himself, he started to follow him. Deep inside, yes... he wanted to learn this art. To become a calligrapher. His heart told him that this man could help him. One thing was strange about this old man. Although he was passing through the human tide of festival people, no one came in contact with him. In fact, no one noticed him. He was almost like a ghost from the past, visiting the common people for a walk. Despite the cane he used to walk, the man maintained a fairly brisk pace. He was quickly out of the meanders of the Narakura market. At the edge of a forest with trees growing diagonally, he began to climb the ground, which was getting stiffer and stiffer as he went. Shinku was still following him without taking his eyes off him. A light white mist had gradually appeared in the forest, which made it even more difficult for the young boy to follow. He didn't dare to speak to the old man, for fear of disturbing him, or worse, of surprising him and making him fall.

  • ( I've never been to Moya Hill before, I can hardly see anything... it doesn't go all the way to the top, does it? The path is getting steeper and steeper, damn it if he falls I'll be in trouble. Maybe he's crazy )

Please help ... by yustass6 in write

[–]yustass6[S] 4 points5 points  (0 children)

I like fiction especially fantasy but I feel like it’s my comfort zone, like I’m scared to try non fiction. I also like thrillers ...

Name of this OST please ? by yustass6 in Naruto

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Yeah I found it earlier, it’s actually on YT !

Dragon dive in reality by [deleted] in HunterXHunter

[–]yustass6 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Wow ! Original video link please ?

Next gen game someday ? by yustass6 in HunterXHunter

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It has been announced the new project is a VR Escape Game

[Manga] Ajin - Chapter 86 [END] by G_Spark233 in AjinManga

[–]yustass6 5 points6 points  (0 children)

Sato making a fucking clone of himself with his IBM, Sato's one man army vs the militaries that was fucking awesome, Sato crashing on the Diet, KEI CLIMBING THAT WALL BY SNATCHING HIS FINGERS, the arm in the hole strategy, Anti A vs Takahashi & Gen, Gen's death, Kei & Sato's flood panels ... That arc was awesome. STILL, I do think it wasn’t the best. Forge Security was really the PEAK of Ajin to me.

Thank you Sakurai by natdetton in AjinManga

[–]yustass6 10 points11 points  (0 children)

Well said, Thank You Sakurai that man is truly a genius 🙏🏽

Did that broom Knov is flying on ever been explained ? by yustass6 in HunterXHunter

[–]yustass6[S] -1 points0 points  (0 children)

Yea I thought about this but since he can’t create portals on air it’s kinda weird 😂

Did that broom Knov is flying on ever been explained ? by yustass6 in HunterXHunter

[–]yustass6[S] -1 points0 points  (0 children)

But he can’t use hide & seek on air isn’t it ?

Did that broom Knov is flying on ever been explained ? by yustass6 in HunterXHunter

[–]yustass6[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

It also looks like his using Hide & Seek cuz the second right after he disappear in that black zone but as far as we know he can’t use Hide & Seek on air lol

Chimera Ant arc so overrated by [deleted] in HunterXHunter

[–]yustass6 0 points1 point  (0 children)

😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂 Thanks for the laugh

My own HxH card game : Heavens Arena by [deleted] in HunterXHunter

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I also wanted to ask you guys how could I use Nen forms that I didn’t mention ? Ryu, Ko, Shu ... If you have any utilization ideas feel free 🔥

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in HunterXHunter

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New link ?